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So our Twilight got ascend with the help of her Goddess doppelganger? I call it cheating. But this should cement the fact that no mortal spell could ascend a pony. Otherwise it would be really a mess if someone else get a hold of Starswirl's spell book.
Not to mention this sudden rank-up should mess Celestia and Luna up for a while. 🤣
So the fifth leaf indicate a demon and the sixth leaf indicate an angel/god?
My former student has outranked me? But... what does it mean? and who is this 'Dad'?
Suddenly a white rabbit pounced on the unsuspecting cat only to be bitched slapped with said cat's tail several dozen times
Me:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!!😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹😹
ALSOO FIRST TO COMMENT!!!!
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Dad will be explained in next chapter that's all I'm giving you
Haven't read the chapter yet, but I gotta ask... is that really the title or did you really misspell 'Balance'?
Can I be honest here, but this chapter felt... off, beside the sudden rise of grammar and writing mistakes, when I checked the story you made a crossover with... it showed the story hasn't been updated for nearly three years - the latest chapter doesn't count as it's more of an update than a chapter - that and the ending of this chapter just ends suddenly... I mean the last paragraph has no proper commas for peat's sake!
The start of the chapter is how I imagined your story is written, but the moment the displaced entered the story... quality just suddenly dropped like somebody else was writing the story instead... it doesn't help that there's no written chapter showing the displaced's perspective on the other displaced story, so I'm just... really confused and a tad conflicted about this chapter... really I'm not sure if this will become canon due to the lack of updating the other story has.
Besides that, the chapter was good read just... felt a tad off than your previously chapters.
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I know about the grammar and commas but I can only go back and fix so much that I catch, a lot of this was written and posted via phones as they are the only means I and my co-writer have to work with at the time due to me being at work, I do apologize for the dip in quality but sometimes we must make do with what we have at hand.