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Nice chapter. The story seemed to progress quite nicely, and I like his conversation with Secre.
Great chapter keep up the good work!
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I was never a big fan of the pecking she did to Asta in the show and the timing of it was usually at the wrong points and places in the story. At least in my opinion but I also wanted to show that Asta is going to monopolize on his knowledge of the world as much as he can without steering the timeline and events to much out of skew. Some may question this with my earlier chapter but I wanted to right a wrong for Liebe, even if the one sealed in the grimoire can't have his mother there will be an aspect out there in a world that did grow up with her. And Spoiler not completely cutting these two out. They shall make a return to the story very soon ^w^
Already inviting to dinner? Nice going Asta. XD At this point, I'm thinking each of the girls that falls for him will wind up invited to Equestria. Hope so at any rate. XD
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I don't think they could pass the immigrant interview. Twilight is a tough officer after all.
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Let's just say I haven't decided if they're going back to Equestria as of yet. Right now, it's about 60-40. 60 they stay forty the go, Let put this out there too, it's ultimately not up to Twilight if they join the herd now is it. Fluttershy has the final say-so being headmare and that even if they do come back.