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Well I feel like an idiot. I missed the misspelling of the chapter of all things.
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No that was me
To who ever did the editing for this, I have to say you missed quite a bit. Mostly just missing/misused words though.
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If you need a second set of Eyes to go over these chapters, let me know as I have found myself with some time to spare as of recent.
Edit: Don't get me wrong, I love it regardless! I honestly can't wait for Shy's Reaction to not only him being out so long and hurting himself, but also Him asking her out! 50 Bits says she Faints outright!
The action is this chapter is really good. Captain Yami will surely proud of him.
I imagine it looks like armament haki.