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Good chapter, excluding the fact that the proofreading worsened. Beyond that though, very nice chapter.^^
9814473
sorry but no proof-reading was done this time. I was too excited to have gotten some much work done after my hospital stay and went ahead and posted it.
9814477
Welp, that explains a lot. But, as said, other than that, was a very good chapter.
And good to hear you're feeling better then.^_^
9814477
Figured as much, if you want I can copy it, fix the errors and send it back to you in a PM for repost?
Otherwise very good chapter, though I get a feeling Asta is gonna lay a massive beat down on Sombra for some reason!
9815156
Agreed
Can't wait to see his face when he finds out who the 'crimson sage' is
It might be better if it is "anti-magic knight"
9816583
the title is quite 'anti' climatic