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To be fair, your magic is lightning which can easily kill a person no matter how you tried to tone it down. So of course, Asta had to fight you for real otherwise he won't come out in one piece.
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This is true but at the same time, no matter who his opponent is be they kid or elder Asta comes at them as if it is a fight to the death, no matter if they are weaker or stronger than him.
That was a epic battle I approve and at least yami got some good answers as the days go on he can hear more info on what Austin knows up until the point where he leaves and goes home also Noel and all the other girls like Asta we'll find out that he is a king himself of a completely different land in a completely different world the tension on that moment is deliciously tense epic and mind-blowingly crazy I can't wait for them to blow their mind when they hear it I can just hear the strings on their sanity just snap
Also I cannot wait for the next chapter this story is so awesome I want to see all of it especially when chapters are left what they feel like left hanging at a point where it just needs to keep going and yummy is going to get a epic sword that will be durable as hell considering hasta and his blacksmith skill is on par artifact Smith's of the dwarves or what seems like artifacts Smith's of the dwarves I mean hell the blacksmith that Austin worked with literally complimented him to the point where Austin was the better Smith it's insane
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Yes and if you recall, the smith was a quarter dwarf or at least A majority descendant of the dwarves similar to charmy but yet still less then her as she is half dwarf
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Yeah and he still praises asta to be better that's a very big compliment especially when it comes from the dwarf race
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The thing about the skills Asta gained from Deltorix, blacksmithing being among the few, they never stop improving themselves. So the more he uses it the better he gets at like any muscle. His skills were never reset though his body was meaning he had to completely retool himself for even the most minor of things which in turn gave his skill more experience to grow stronger. This sword he is making will be the most powerful weapon he’s mad thus far and one of the most powerful that he’ll ever create in his top ten. He will actually be the most powerful weapon in this world outside his own.
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Yup yup it shows he takes those skills seriously to improve them enough that a dwarf descendent is saying they are better then them it's impressive
I’ve watched a little black clover and I am enjoy this, the fact that you are using the story from BC but also at the same time forging your own path is great and I can’t wait to see more! Tis a shame I’ve caught up as this was my backup story with a lot of chapters to still read but still good and again can’t wait too see more!
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Sorry but this is the part where more of my own plot start to rear its head so there will be more original content from me than from BC. I love the story of BC which is why I based this character of it and this part of the story is actually being taken form the drafts of the original story i was going to write that wasn’t a displaced. I’m currently in the middle of my current chapter. I do wish I could write faster but most of my writing comes to me in spurts and I will do one scene in several revisions. Thus it takes a while to mesh what all I come up with in to a cohesive line
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As I said I love the fact that your using BC story but also forging your own path instead of following it to the letter. And take your time mate I enjoy these chapter and I love to see more when you put em and have them be coherent and well paced, also love the fact that your getting all the love interests involved here and I do want to see how they handle the fact of moving to another realm and if not how they handle the good bye. So keep up the awesome work and write it as you feel the bursts for it thus allowing YOU to keep enjoying the writing instead of feeling like it’s being squeezed outta you like a juicer does to lemonade.