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Spike did a lot better than the Mane 6 originally gave him credit. At this rate, he will become a knight in shining scale in no time.
Lot of typos but this is overall an amazing chapter! I look forward to more.
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Ditto, very fun chapter but good lord man, did Discord help you type? Spellcheck.
A quote from an obscure legend that best fits how Asta and Spike handled Carribo goes a little something like this.
"A Wyrm will follow the path of Conquest down of of two roads. The first road is to claim what others keep and is fueled by the demon of greed. The second road is to destroy those that come to take what the wyrm hold closest to their heart. It is at the end of the second road one will find the most terrifying of beasts, for they care not of those that stand against them only for those that stand beside them. Pride and Loyalty are the guardians of this road the great demon that strike terror in those conquered, and the angel that inspires the horde of the heart."
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Spike is equivalent to D&Ds Dragonborn paladin honestly, heh he should be called the “Sun Paladin” in honor of the Knights and his connection to Celestia!
Grammer check aisle 4
Do you have an editor/did you upload this raw? Lot of obvious spelling mistakes.
Wow that's a lot of typos..... way more than the previous chapters that's for sure.
Aside from that, good shit.
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My apologies but this story really didn’t have a proper editor until this year and I managed what I could until I got grammar after this