Hi everyone! RainbowThunder is here. I am Russian pegasister (yes, even if I have stallion on avatar), who practices English in fanfic writing. And I like ponies. That's all.
Mudbriar lived a quiet life and loved Maud Pie. But one day he made a mistake and lost everything he had. But along with this, he will not only change, but also be able to live life anew. However, he can do it only in a slightly different form.
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A few mistakes, such as...
I never run so fast( I never ran so fast)
Decently written so good job.
Why are there so many dog stories though, I'm wondering if I missed something...
Umm...
Pocket Like!
~Tosses a Like in your face, running away~
Must be a strange feeling and its Panic, Completly normal.
One things for sure, maud makes them Pay once she finds out what happened
NIce work!
Very nice, as always. But "O my God", shouldn't that be "Oh my gosh?
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Oh, right. Thanks
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You're welcome!
A very nice and fitting ending!. Though, you could show the attackers being brought to justice.