When people begin suffering intense nightmares that kill their victims, salvation comes in the form of a young girl who overcame her despair through sheer force of will. She is the Trickster, and she will become the light in the darkness.
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Hm..... interesting.
See, you're dropping all these little lines and hooks around Twilight. And I'm not entirely ok with that, cause it means I will either be really satisfied with what I am leaning to believe is the payout, or disappointment at having a hope crushed..
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Well, I hope you enjoy the payout at the end. I'm trying to make the story plots actually good and not triple A levels of disappointing.
Seems like Twi is going to get her own Dungeon at some point if this keeps up.
Who or what is triple A, and how many chapters long will this story be?
After thinking about it, Xion's theme is a great leitmotif for your versions of Celestia, and that's without taking my bias towards Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days into account.
On that note, I always look forward to whenever you use Kingdom Hearts music in your stories since that's what fully got me into that franchise. Makes me wonder what a Equestria Girls/Kingdom Hearts story from you will be like.
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Triple A is referring to Triple A games, which to me have no substance what so ever.
As for how many chapters... um... how many days are in a year? Probably just a bit under that, so... we're looking at somewhere between 200 to 300 chapters, give or take.
Yeah... it's gonna be a long one...
Bad mojo I sense
Starlight's so cute, getting embarrassed at Trixie nearly seeing her naked. And how tight is Starlight's nightgown that her nipples visibly poke out?
Uh oh, I'm starting to worry that Twilight's jealousy will get the better of her.
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It's not so much that it's tight. No, she WISHES it were just that. It's the fact that it's sheer, so her breasts can be seen THROUGH the fabric.
GOD I love Celestia.
You opened the doors to her future.
Turns out Celestia was an actual mother, then something went wrong or somesuch. (I actually don't know. I don't know what to expect, I'm not editing this.)
... This is actually tugging at MY heartstrings, you know how hard that is?
So, obligatory Jojo's reference, the Empress Stand User was, Nena. Well, she got the Joseph Joestar treatment so, could be worse.
Sup, Vic?
Attractive is attractive, regardless of orientation.
So, it's all about socializing to gain more power.
Well, you know what they say, Friendship is Magic.
Which means it might be easier for them to open up to you.
Hang on, yellow eyes, bond with the Devil, is, Victor related to Discord or Tirek in some way?
Because cats desire attention and they get it.
I REALLY like Trixie here.
Worst part is, I believe you.
Hm... My way of loving myself usually involves spiting those who won't, so, it works for me, but not sure it will for you.
Maybe? I dunno.
You ain't kidding.
Precisely. Journey of a thousand miles and all that.
She has a point.
I LIKE you.
Ah, gallows humor, a sign of progress.
So Trixie is Avdol. Alright.
GOD I FUCKING LOVE CELESTIA IN THIS! GAAAAH!
Yikes, that probably didn't help.
Eeeyup.
Maybe.
I suspect you were, you gave some very useful information.
Keep being her friend. The road to recovery is slow, arduous and frustrating. But, it's well worth it to help a friend.
I imagine the Mia Fey pose.
OH yeah.
This honestly does make ME smile. This is some of your best work.
Fucks with ANYONE'S head.
Whenever someone calls another person damaged, or even themselves, I always think back to Heathers. It's a recurring theme and recurring word.
Big time.
Genuine praise does wonders for the spirit.
Oh, this is interesting.
Same thing we do every night, Pinky. Try to take over the world!
Oh boy. This is going to come into play later, isn't it?
Really liking the story. The characters are well done here, I'm a big Persona fan having played all of them and this is spot on to them. I hope you bring in the rest of the Velvet Attendees. They have the funniest personalities, especially Queen Elizabeth. Keep up the great work.
200-300 chapters?
...Bring it on.
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There are 365 days in a year unless it's a leap year. So assuming you're gonna do the whole year and give each day their own chapter, there is a whopping... 358 chapters remaining, not including any epilogues.
Will you give each date their own chapter, or will you be grouping the smaller ones together? Considering how most days between completing the dungeon and waiting for the deadline (At least in Persona 5, not sure about 3 or 4) are free days, I'm pretty sure those would be grouped together until the bigger days.
However, I have no idea if you'll be doing something similar for your fanfic, so I'm not sure if you will go for the latter option.
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Funny, I was planning on doing more or less the latter when it came to smaller days where nothing happened. That way even if there's a string of days that are just regular days, I can still give the readers something meaty and worth their time, while possibly hinting at other plot points.
Great to see Starlight slowly for,I gotta social links. Though I have a bad feeling about that ending.
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Is that like a normal thing teenage girls wear? That aint violating any dress codes or anything? There's a lot of fan service in this.
Wait, how would Starlight and Trixie buy upgraded weapons for the phase? From now i'm calling Starlight's default scythe as 'The Render'
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Funny enough, at the time of making the story, I had a hard time coming up with a means for that, so I sort of just, didn't come up with an explanation. These days though, I have an idea, and if I were to make this into a game, I'd employ it.
Effectively, I'd have multiple spirits flying around the Akashic Records. People who've passed on, entities native to the dream world, possibly some SMT demons/Shadows here and there. One of them would be the item vendor, and one would be the weapon vendor, giving it more of a SMT Nocturne feel to it.
You know, after reading through the descriptions of each arcane of the tarot cards, Celestia is the obvious choice to the Empress.