When people begin suffering intense nightmares that kill their victims, salvation comes in the form of a young girl who overcame her despair through sheer force of will. She is the Trickster, and she will become the light in the darkness.
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So the core party has formed, but if I remember right, Persona games tend to have 6+ possible party members even if you can only field 4 at a time. That leaves room for other potential Persona users.
Ah. And there's our strange Persona user at the end. Not bad.
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There will be others. When I said the party's complete, I meant the starting four.
I've got big plans for two members in particular.
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I figured there would be more. Do you have a number for how big the party will end up being? No need to give the number if you want it to be a surprise.
Well, it's no secret that the rest of the mane 6 will become Persona users. There are two other characters I'm fiddling with though: one who's going to definitely join at some point but might not stay, and another who I'm kind of on the fence in terms of whether or not they will be joining things.
So a part of about 9 minimum and 10 maximum.
Another amazing chapter. It isn't often a fanfic actually manages to make me emotional, but you pulled it off.
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That's the best reception I could receive for this story, especially since Persona is very emotional as a series.
So there's a mysterious witch who uses her power more selfishly. And Fleur gets a change of heart instead of death eh?
Well... this next arc should be interesting. Amazing writing on this one, Azure. You’ve managed to capture something I think some writers seem to miss, and it’s making you relate to the characters on several levels. Rainbow Dash, just like myself, wanted to kill Fleur with every inch of her body, but was stopped by Pinkie Pie.
This arc (I hope you don’t mind me labeling as those) was very interesting. It was definitely worth sticking around for the end, even if the story isn’t over. Now who is the next witch... that’s a mystery I feel I can solve, but I’ll just leave it up to the others to figure out. But anyways, overall still a great story
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Thank you for your kind words. I'm really proud of this story, and this chapter in particular. Personally, my favorite part is the chase scene/boss fight phase one with Shadow Fleur. That idea came to me as I was typing, and it just felt right to me. This arc was hard for me to write, because Pinkie Pie is so sweet, you just can't hurt her and feel good about it, you know?
In terms of how readers relate to the characters, I'm glad I'm doing a good job there. Persona is all about characters that feel real, and I'm really happy to be pulling that off with the story thus far. I hope to continue with that trend as further arcs get written.
As for the next arc, I'll let you and other's speculate, but let's just say I'm really looking forward to writing that Dungeon.
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Ah, so it's Rarity's then.
I'm sadly inclined to agree.
You're going to have a Dungeon later in the fic, aren't you?
Nope.
Level up!
God I hope so.
This is bad, this is not good at all.
Be that as it may, it's still YOUR career.
I'm with you on that.
Good! Something we can work with.
Sounds about right.
Huh, so what happened?
Hm...
Then YELL AT HER.
FUCK THAT! Your story never ends. Stories are eternal, they only end when all memory of you fades from this world! When nobody even knows your name, when nothing is left of you, when they're nothing left to tell, then, and only then does your story end.
She's living through Pinkie Pie, vicariously.
She's manipulating her.
Oh FUCK.
Fuck Fleur!
I hope so.
One day more, another day, another destiny...
I like her.
Then tell Fleur so go fuck herself.
Then you're not an actress, you're a puppet on strings.
And you DON'T fuck with a witch.
Don't worry, Azure isn't going to kill off Dashie. Right?
And we have RainbowPie!
Of couse she was.
It's also a gun.
Midnight flat, OK, let's do this.
Oh.
True Love's Kiss breaks the spell.
You fucking narcissist.
You already have, lady!
She would.
As ugly on the outside as you are on the inside.
Oh hell, she's charging up a super attack!
Ah shit.
I like you.
No "les" here, just "enfants"
Stand up to scum like YOU.
YES! Now, Stand up above the crowd, and stand proud with your friends!
Both Pinkie Pie, and her Persona, are Sailor Moon.
I'M NOT YOUR PET! NOT ANOTHER THING YOU OWN! I WAS NOT BORN GUILTY OF YOUR CRIMES! YOUR RICHES AND YOUR INFLUENCE CAN'T HOLD ME ANYMORE! I WON'T BE POSSESSED! BURDENED BY YOUR ROYAL TEST! I WILL NOT SURRENDER THIS LIFE, IS, MINE!
She's what the party was missing. You had a Rogue, a Wizard and a Fighter. You were missing a Cleric.
OH REALLY?! Let's find out how true that is!
Do it.
Precisely. And she won't be missed. Freddy Krueger this cunt.
No, but Fleur deserves death.
I do! She's a monster!
A better person than I would be.
Sunset?
Her, apparently.
I STILL can't help but picture her as Raiden from Metal Gear Rising. Since they both use lightning and swords. And because the first thing he does is throw a GIANT FUCKING ROBOT into the air. Then what he does to the last giant robot is suplex the giant robot, TWICE, rip off its sword arm, fucking fence with it, and then CUT IT TO PIECES WITH THE GIANT SWORD.
Yes! Thank god Pinkie is saved. Just in time too, that was a little too close.
This arc was intense from start to finish. You did a good job making us care for the characters and feel just as pressured as they were. I am looking forward to see what happens to the real Fleur. True, she deserves all the karma she can get after what she did to Pinkie, but how much will she change after what happened to her Shadow?
That ending scene though... was that Sunset Shimmer?
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*whistles innocently*
This story is so amazing, I'm gonna share this on Twitter to show more people
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THANK YOU!!!
*hugs you* I love you so much~!
Hello, I came to say that you and this fanfic are breathtaking.
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Hey, no sweat. You're a fantastic author and I'm glad to support you any way I can.
You went full Sailor Moon. I'm glad you went full Sailor Moon. Funny enough since this around the release of Sailor Moon Stars dub and the announcement of the new movie Sailor Moon Eternal. And looks like my wife is coming.
Of course that would be her persona
I dubbed Pinkie's default as 'Luna'
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That actually works, since I imagine that for her, her primary weapon is a broach.
Since, you know, Sailor Moon.
SUNSET!?