When Cheese Sandwich decides to visit Pinkie for undisclosed reasons, she is more than excited! However when Cheese accidentally unlocks an new desire in Pinkie's mind, nothing may never be the same.
For one thing, someone's weight is going to grow...
[CONTAINS MALE WEIGHT GAIN, FAT FEEDISM, AND WEIRD AL REFERENCES]
this ?
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Obviously
There's some good concepts here but you really need to slow down and edit better. A lot of it reads weirdly and more like a spoken story made up on the fly than proper written prose.
keep this story going please you really don't see to many stories like this
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I will...