Upon the destruction (failure to save) of a realm and thrown though the void, Ethan Pow in another form collides with a unknown barrier protecting the realm where Equestira exist. Causing a part of his crystalline brain to break though the barrier and under some odd effects revived as another being. Believing he is a clone, Delta must learn his propose with the knowledge he knows so far. Hoping he doesn't mess everything up in the process.
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Because I made this some time ago on fanfiction.net.
not a flame, but i find this..... very odd to read. If i might nquire would English be you're First language? I highly suggest getting some sort of pre-reader or editor to help smooth out some of the sentences. it would make this fic a whole lot better. Other then that i find this rather interesting. keep it coming. thumbs up also
I like it so far,and I must ask.
Who drew that picture.
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Grammar isn't something that my strong suit (I won't hide that nor would I be able too.). All the editing done so far was help of some friends along the way but not proactively as they been busy.
Its not a flame nor horrible what you said, Its what I excepted in a review... All I get on fanfiction.net is "good job, keep it going" thank you for your feedback.
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http://pony-untastic.deviantart.com/
It was a commission and a very cheap one at that.
Fair Warning to all commentators, If your post isn't constructive in anyway, I will delete it outright. Don't like the story, just place a thumbs down and move on. I am not here to deal with trolls, I am here to write a story.
I am a Amateur writer and as such my work isn't going to be wonderful, but coming on and getting insults without reasonable constructive view to improve on this or future writing I will then not listen or care of your view.
My Grammar sucks and I know this. If I (or someone and informs me) find a error then I will fix it.
The Main Character name is Ethan Pow, which a nickname Delta, not good enough for ya to have a pony name then fine I might change it out once I get a name I like in there.
Judging by the cover of the story is a poor thing to do, nor do I accept it as a excuse to bash what I done so far. You might like if you read the contents of the book or you will not.
Now, If you where kind enough to read and not like it, then I am not here to force you to think otherwise, Have a nice day.
LOL. Kill two birds with one stone.
can't wait to read more
1047479
I got a tool that helps me clean up grammar in my work, The first 6 chapters have been changed, if you want go ahead and give them some look over. I hope I made it 'read-able'