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Valystine


Hello! The name's Valystine! I love writing, and drawing as well. Small warning, I have the tendency to start stories and probably not finish them, but please do enjoy what I have to offer. Goodbye!

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Do not think. Do not question. Just do as your told. Obey the laws. Take your pills. Do not worry about a thing. Do not deviate from the populace. Obey the Overmare. Take your pills. Do not forget to take your pills. Have you taken your pills? Remember to take your pills four times a day. Take your pills. Take your pills. Take your pills. Pills. Pills. Pills. Pills. Pills. Pills. Pills.

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Why? Why can't I think? Why can't I question? Why do I have to obey these laws? Why can't I deviate? Why do I have to listen to the Overmare? Why do I have to take these pills?

Who am I? Why am I living this life? Am I more than just a serial number?

I don't want to live like this anymore. Why is everypony else okay with it? Everything is corrupted... horrible. How did we become to live such manufactured lives? Everypony lives in ignorance. Why can't they see what's going on? Why won't anypony listen? I have to do something. I have to make somepony listen.

I WON'T take my pills. I WON'T listen to the Overmare. I WILL question everything. I WILL put an end to it.

YOU WILL NOT CONTROL ME!

Edit #1: The rating has been changed from 'Teen' to 'Mature' as a precaution for a scene featured in the chapter "A Break In The Mold [Part Two]" and for future scenes planned for future chapters. If you believe the rating can remain 'Teen' while still featuring this scene, please let me know. Thanks!

Edit #2: The rating has been changed back to 'Teen' after carefully reviewing the particular scene in "A Break In The Mold [Part Two]" that I had made me change the rating to 'Mature'. If the story is incorrectly tagged as 'Teen' because of that particular scene in the story, please let me know and I'll change it again.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

This is quite interesting. Have a like.

9421432
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :twilightsmile:

10$ says that all this was created by glim glam

9429221
I suppose we'll have wait and see when the chapter comes to reveal who the Overmare is and she explains her actions, hmm? :raritywink:

Very, very interesting start to the story, really looking forward to it!

Also found you!

9438109
I'm very glad you like it so far!

And glad you did!

Intriguing, i would like to see where this goes.....

9469851
I'm glad you enjoyed it thus far! The next few chapters will definitely be interesting!

I do hope you continue this.

Do you plan on continuing this? I hope you do.....

First her pills doesn't seem to work, then that mare... curious situation to say the least.
Time to see how the mold breaks.

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