Good job!

10794766 Looks around -- eyes shot wide and nervously -- as I clutch a shotgun in a corner of my room; panting

You think so? Well thank you plenty! I've been stewing on these last few chapters I've had completed for a while now and I finally worked up the nerve to throw 'em to the people.

If you have any critiques/criticisms feel free to lay 'em on me; I haven't been paying attention to my work as much as I should have, so anything to shake the rust off is welcome!

This seems interesting. Can’t wait to start reading it

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Well I hope you enjoy the read! I am in the middle of some rehashing on it and the like, but I plan on getting back on this once I'm done with hammering certain kinks out.