The Leaders of Discordian Rule, or LDR, has risen. The ruthless group's goal is to overthrow the princesses and rule Equestria in the name of their idol, Discord. Their first goal: kidnap the Element of Magic, and any other Element they can get their hooves on.
Meanwhile, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and a few other mares in Ponyville, are hiding a secret. A BIG secret. When LDR invades Ponyville, the secret is revealed. With their knowledge, they are the only ones (and a few more friends) who can stop complete chaos. But can they?
That's not the only secret . . .
*This is my first fic, so complement, criticize, and suggest at will.
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WARNING: Language used.
I just noticed something. When your listing applejack, you say she has a rainbow mane?
She is blonde, right?
***a blue Pegasus with a rainbow-mane and sunglasses, and an orange earth pony with a rainbow mane and a cowboy hat.***
I liked it. I can't wait to see how you handle the espionage genre.
i have a feeling this is gonna be somewhat epic, and i'm gonna bet they're gonna have a bucking hard time catching pinkie
61718 Thanks man! didn't catch that. already edited.
61748 well, it all depends: are they in all-out take everyone down mode, or in stealth mode
61768
why not both? stealth mode to set the explosives then all out to get the hell out before they go off
>>SteampunkBrony: Damn, man, you've just given me SO many good ideas!
61768 Welcome. Story +CMC + ???? = AWSOME
I'm really not sure if this format of writing goes well with what I'm planning.
I want to do this format for the rest of this chapter, and any other operation/mission chapters. Everything else will follow the format on the prologue.
Comment on the chapter and the above statement!
lookin good so far brony. Format works great, although i see why you did it try to combine sections in the future and keep with one thread a little longer is my tip. I do something similar in my story Night's Magic (flashing from place to place that is). Can't wait to see where this goes.
86202 Thanks man! appreciate it.
85678 It will all start to come together during the second part. But i see your concern. FYI to you, and anyone else who cares: The format mostly comes from the book "Flight 116 is Down" by Caroline B. Cooney.
Cliffhanger! I love it!
This feels a bit rushed, in my personal opinion. It may need some work at a later time.
I suck at Apple Family accents! I so need to work on that. feel free to comment on that - please.
Sorry it takes so long. Back to writing - I love it!
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152448 WHAT GAME IS THAT!!!? I am so going to buy it, looks awesome.
by the way, thanks. 
Interesting storyline update as it seems that the CMC are more than just cute little fillies trying to get teh Cuite marks.
Please do keep putting up the good work upon such an intersting tale as I cannot wait to see how you will do Pinkie Pie and Rarity's capture ?
154714 HUGE SPOILER
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Who said Pinkie Pie would get captured? She has contacts - especially one that is in Ponyville right then. . . And it's not a CMC or Fluttershy . . .
Who said Rarity would be captured?