Prologue
Sunset Shimmer opened the doors of Sugarcube Corner. Right there, were her friends staring at her with angry/disgusted looks. Sunset inhaled and opened her mouth to speak but Rainbow Dash quickly got up from her seat with a furious expression.
"Hey, get out!" She barked.
"Yer not welcome here, Sunset!" Applejack followed.
Sunset shot back for a moment, but she quickly gather up her courage and walked forward. She got her journal from her backpack and got to the current page where she was communicating with Princess Twilight.
"Look guys," she said, "I know you don't trust me. But I've been talking with Princess Twilight and-"
Rainbow's slap in the face had enough impact to knock Sunset down to the ground.
"You lied to Twilight too," She screamed, "like you've been to all of us! Bullshit, Sunset! Why do you manipulate people!"
Sunset got back up with tears in her eyes, holding the swelling bruise from the slap.
"Please guys, I know who Anon-a-Miss is, if you just listen to me!" she said with desperation.
"Sunset, please, yer only makin' it worse," said Applejack, "you, are the only suspect. You are the only person who knew mah nickname. You are the only person who took those photos at the sleepover, on your phone. You are the only other person who knew our secrets. And you are the only person who's spreadin' secrets. Please, for yer own sake, git outta here and never come back!"
Sobs escaped from Sunset's mouth as she began to taste defeat.
"Please, you have to listen to me; I'm your friend! Just think about the times we had together! Applejack, remember the time we had a hayride together this fall, I had so much fun and-"
"Just shut yer lyin' trap up Sunset," snapped AJ, getting up from her seat, "is it so hard to tell the truth, you stupid son of a bitch. Or so help me!"
Sunset looked at Dash with fresh tears leaking out her eyes, making her vision misty.
"Dash, remember the times I show up at your games and how I cheer for you."
"You mean pretend to cheer! You can't take advantage of us no longer, asshole! You are the worst person I have ever known. Becoming friends with you was the absolute worst mistake I've ever made. I wish I never met you, Sunslut Slutter!"
Sunset was crying at this point. She went to Rarity and looked at her with bloodshot eyes.
"Rarity, please, you have to believe me! Remember all the outfits you made for me, I-"
"Hmm! That was before I knew you were planning to humiliate us. I even made the most beautiful outfit for you for Christmas. But now, I realized that was just a mistake. You are not going to steal our trust anymore you motherfucking thief."
Sunset was now losing hope, there was only Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy left.
"Pinkie! Remember the parties you've thrown, and how much fun I had. Those were the best times of my life."
"well, you were just pretending to have fun, so you can gain my trust. I can't believe I was so stupid to fall for your tricks, but it's not gonna work anymore, you ugly skank!"
Sunset's jaw dropped slightly as she couldn't believe the curse word Pinkie just said. Fluttershy was her last hope.
"Please Fluttershy," she whimpered, "remember all the times you've so kind to, or the time I help you out at the animal shelter or-"
SMACK!
Rainbow had punched her in the jaw, once again knocking her down to the ground.
"You will not threaten her!" she yelled.
Sunset quickly got back up the ground.
"Guys, please, your friends, my family, I tried to prove that I've changed after the Fall Formal. Do you expect me give that away. Your friendship, The Battle of The Bands, everything I did. And for what reason?"
"Yea, why were ya doin' this?" sneered Applejack.
"We laid our hearts to you, and you just threw it out!" said Rarity.
"Like they always say: once a demon, always a demon!" growled Rainbow Dash.
Suddenly AJ walked up to Sunset and snatched the book she was holding.
"Tah make sure ya never lie to the princess again." she snarled.
"And do us a favor, Anon-a-Miss," said Rainbow, cracking a fist, "AND GET OUTTA HERE BEFORE WE KILL YOU!"
Sunset did the only thing she can think to do: she ran as fast as she could out of the cafe and to her apartment. As she did she could hear her former friends shouting at her.
"Git outta of our lives, ya good for nothing liar!"
"Good riddance! Everyone will do so much better without you, you damn thief!"
"I hope I never see you again, she-demon!"
"Go back to where you came from, secret-stealer!"
"I wish I've never been friends with you in the first place Sunset!"
Hearing made Sunset ran even faster then so ever had before. Then she ran in Apple Bloom, Applejack's younger sister.
"Sunset, wait! Ah-"
"Leave me alone!"
Alone. That's all Sunset wants right now.
Apple Bloom on the other hand pulled out her phone, went on her MyStable account and typed down
'Emergency CMC meeting, meet me at the barn in 20 minutes'
When she reached her apartment, Sunset slammed the door shut. Then she collapsed on her couch and began to cry. Wet tears cascaded from her chin and onto the floor as she can't get those things out of her mind. How could her friends turn their backs on her after how much she proved that she changed. Sunset couldn't take anymore; she was afraid of what will happen at school tomorrow.
"I'm sorry Twilight" she croaked, "I failed you..."
She walked to the kitchen, opened the drawer, and took out the largest and sharpest kitchen knife she had. She stared at it, debating if she should really do this.
'You secret-stealer!'
'Ah'm sorry, but you did this to us. Tell us whatever secrets you want, but we don't have to listen.'
'We trusted you Sunset, we thought you were our friend!'
'How can you do this to us, after all we been though together'
'You're not our friend!'
Those lines kept on repeating in her head, like some looped song. With shaking hands, she stabbed to knife though her head.
Dying instantly.
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Fuck you hit the ground running! Right into the action! I enjoyed the movie and am interested how this story plays out
Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy. All 5 of you have disappointment me for the last time. ðŸ˜
9235998
In my opinion, keep insulting Sunset, girls. That will just make your true suffering for when the truth comes out all the more delicious.
9236002
So true
9236002
I rather throw ‘em in a lion den!
Poor Sunset,😟 those jerks don't deserve you.
9236043
Why would you give the poor lions indigestion or food poisoning? What did they do to you?
While i like the idea, the way Sunset killed herself is rather...Weak. Stabbing the knife thru her head?
It would been more believable, if she slit her throat, or wrist or thru her heart somehow.
I guess it was a attempt to be dramatic but like i said can't see that happening nor do I want to. shudders!
9236104
Well it was either that or program a terminator to kill ‘em. And I don’t have the equipment to do that
Oh boy, I can't wait for the minute they realize how badly they fucked up. I will savor there despair😈
Poor sunset you never deserved this. I hope those rainbrats gets whats coming to them.
Oh boy. Princess Twilight Sparkle is NOT going to like this.
lets see here this goes
Please continue and please don’t abandon this fic, I want to see those,
RAINBITCHES
get what’s coming to them!!!
Let's see where this goes but I have to say the swearing is a bit much lol
There’s no way Sunset would manage to stab a kitchen knife through her own head. The strength needed would be pretty big, skull isn’t easy to penetrate after all, and the angle she would need to use would be awkward as well.
Personally, I would’ve gone with either slit wrists in the bathtub, a noose, jumping from a high place, or even a gun.
...Disney's A Wrinkle in Time?
Disney's?
Gah. That adaptation was a visually stunning scattershot of Madeleine L'Engle's original work. They barely referenced Aunt Beast, the Darkness wasn't even given the respect it deserved... it looked GREAT, but it didn't read well at all.
Nobody ever adapts A Wind In The Door...
And I'm not actually seeing how this is related to the adaptation, actually...
Look. This looks like it could be a great story, if you dropped the crossover in the title. Because that crossover creates expectations, from new fans and old. At the moment, this is a potentially gut-wrenching Equestria Girls fic, with a great start. Don't shoot yourself in the foot by tying yourself to something unrelated.
This is good so far, but I have one suggestion as to how Sunset killed herself. Human bone is an incredibly sturdy substance and the skull itself is thick. While it is possible to break it, it's not easy as you made it seem. Sunset wouldn't have been able to plunge a knife through her skull because it would take a lot more than just her raw strength to do it and because a human female's skull is just a bit thicker than a human male's. If her death is supposed to be as quick and painless as possible, you might want to change her stabbing herself in the head to her shooting herself in the head. A gun would be able to do what a knife can't in this case.
Sorry if I seemed a bit nitpicky. It just struck me as weird that a person could kill themselves by plunging a knife through their head.
9237901
Yeah I would think slitting her throat would be a little more realistic way to go
When are we getting an update?
9240583
Soon
the knife through the head things a bit over the top though, it's actually hard to cut through bones, take eating a pork chop with the bone in, for example, that's about what would happen. The human skull has evolved to protect the brain so there are very few places that a knife can stab and cause lethal damage. However, almost none can "instantly" kill you. If, by instantly you mean a snap of a finger. The quickest being from behind at the base of the skull and upwards to ruin the brain.
9241344
Good point. The description suggests that the attack was made from the frontal lobe. This is not actually enough to kill somebody, but it will wreck their personality. A gunshot would make more sense.
Sunset took the knife, got into the bathtub, and slit her wrists and then cut into her bare chest, bleeding into the tub and then dying.
Most horrible thing to happen and I rather just say it was a horrible nightmare.
9241344
Maybe should've said 'Columbine Neck Tie' type of cut or something Jason of Friday the 13th would do. but I hate these Sunset dies stories, just not right.
10791722
the rewrite had that.