The Next Day At Canterlot High...
The Canterlot Movie Club nervously walked down the halls, trying to avoid the absolute fury on everyone's faces.
"You should've had of nerve coming here, dicks!" Some hissed behind them. That comment made their spines get a chilled feeling.
"APPLE BLOOM, SWEETIE BELLE, AND SCOOTALOO, PLEASE COME TO THE PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE." Said the intercom.
The CMC gulped to headed to the office, feeling like they get punched in stomach.
"Well, here it goes..." Said Sweetie Belle nervously.
Four minutes later, though it felt like years. The trio were in front of the doors of the Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna office. They each took a breath and cautiously opened the door... And feel like their hearts skipped a few beats. Right there, was not only Celestia and Luna, but two police officers, and Princess Twilight herself.
"Hello girls," said Principal Celestia, "how nice of you to join us. Take a seat."
The three sat down on the three chairs in front of the principal's desk. They all looked down on the ground, not wanting to see the anger and disappointment on everyone's faces. They sat/stood in silence for a good five minutes before, Scootaloo broke the uncomfortable moment.
"Look guys, I knows this's about Anon-a-Miss. And I know we don't have any excuse for what we did, but-"
Twilight furiously went to Scootaloo and slapped her as hard she could in the cheek. A bit of blood splattered all over the area as she cried.
"Twilight... That hurt".
"Well, that's the way Sunset felt!" Screamed to enraged princess, getting ready to slapped in traumatized girl. But Principal Celestia put a hand on Twilight's shoulder.
"Please Twilight, lets just talk this out calmly." she said.
"Now," said VP Luna in a cold and heated tone, "can you explain why did this to Sunset Shimmer? And we have complete evidence that you made Anon-a-Miss and hacked into other people's computers. If any of you deny it, there will be further consequences!"
The girls looked at each other to see their reactions: Scootaloo was pale and terrified, Apple Bloom was about to throw up, and there were tears on Sweetie Belle face. Apple Bloom was the first to talk.
"It's was mah idea," she said, "I've created Anon-a-Miss, because... Ah was jealous of mah sister spendin' her time with Sunset and her friends instead of me. Ah'm so sorry, Ah should ta never did it in the first place."
"Apple Bloom told me about what she did, I felt the same way. So on the slumber party at my house, I snuck in, took Sunset's phone, and posted all of her pictures and videos."
"Soon Anon-a-Miss got way out of hand; people sent us other secret, asking us to post it. And we don't want to do so... we posted it. I've posted everything."
"So let me get this straight," said Twilight, her voice rapidly becoming a scream, "you posted people's most private and embarrassing secret, turned people against Sunset, and other things that you hope that I don't know. ALL BECAUSE YOU WEREN'T INVENTED TO ONE DAMN SLUMBER PARTY!"
"Twilight, calm down." said Celestia calmly. The princess of friendship took a breath and calmed down, but gave the CMC a cold glare.
"Girls, it was right of you to confess about being Anon-a-Miss, and post an apology video. But of course for making one in the first place, there are punishments for what you've done." said Luna.
"Are... are you going to expel us?" said Sweetie Belle nervously.
"We're not going to expel you. You three are good students, you have good grades and have clean permanents. In my eyes, you're just good people who made a mistake," said Celestia as the girls breathed a sigh of relief.
"A very big mistake," said Twilight disgusted
"So instead," said Principal Celestia ignoring Twilight's comment, "you three and going to be suspended for two weeks after the break. after that all of you will have detention everyday for the rest of the school year. You are strictly forbidden to be together on school grounds and will be split up in all of your classes. We will have an assembly where you'll confess to the entire school, and apologize for all the trouble you made. And last but certainly not least, all three of you are forbidden bring any electronics to school for the rest of the year."
"That last one will not necessary, Principal Celestia," said Shining Armour, the chief of the Canterlot Police, "because we're taking them away to build evidence on the case, and chips inside them to track their every move online in case something comes up again."
"Now, follow us to the gym;" said VP Luna, not wanting to look at the girls "it's time to delete the account, once and for all."
At the same time, Luna turned on the speaker of the intercom,
"Attention students, attention, everyone including the staff and teachers, please head to the gym for an assembly. Right now."
The trio each took a breath as the followed the two principals, cops, and the enraged Twilight Sparkle.
She was shaking, a bit red in the face, and stomped all the way to the gym. She couldn't believe that Sunset's friends had turn their back on her, after they promise each other that they'll be there for her.
"Assholes, Bitches, Whores, Skanks, Sluts, Dicks, Fuckheads, Motherfuckers, Bimbos, Jack-asses" she fumed under her breath, clenching her fists. "All of you are to get want's coming to you."
Wow you earned that profanity tag fast.
Don;t tell those Rainidiots still thinking it was a set up by Sunset?
That going to make things even worst, and wonder how long till they find out Sunset is dead?
Also will the charges be increased, as they find out Sunset is dead, the school year of Detention is not something care for....but ok.
I hope they get expelled soon.
Damn. Sure got away with words Twilight.
Do you mean the Rainbitches or the CMC?
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both I'm guessing
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that slap was so worth it.
but again i want to see the rainbooms reaction after this!
....Okay, at this point, I have to say you're going too fast and too far. This is not Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship. This isn't even Twilight Sparkle, vengeful friend. This is Twilight Sparkle In Name Only, possessed by the Demon of Conflict. If you hadn't named her Twilight Sparkle, I wouldn't have recognized her.
There's a reason people generally don't like 'fixfics.' They can be done well, don't get me wrong, but usually they involve somebody stepping out of character to become the tool of the author's ire. Twilight would not be angry. She would be disappointed. She would only get angry after Sunset's death was discovered and, even then, it would be a very tranquil fury.
And the swearing is... no. That is way too much swearing for Twilight.
I don't believe this is Twilight. Not unless she's gone through something really terrible off-screen, and there's no hint that she has.
This could have been an excellent story... if the characters had been allowed to act as themselves.
(It's 'invited', not invented)
Lot of spelling errors in this fic
This story went downhill fast. Chapter one was a favorite, and this chapter confirmed that there is nowhere left to go. I can't read this.
If you plan on writing anything past this, slow down the narrative and use more descriptive language. Take your time, and make it clear what's happening.
I just can't see for me Twilight swearing.
'Almost swearing' Absolutly, but actually swearing.... no.
Is there something missing between this chapter and the last
Well that escalated quickly...way to quickly like holy shit dude. This has become WAY WAY to rushed.
Im guessing she didn't believe the Rainbooms written cough cough "accusations" about Sunset going back to her old ways. Thats a relief for a second there I thought Twilight would believe them and also betray Sunset.
To all of those thinking Twilight is out of character now with her swearing...Just wait until she finds out that Sunset is now DEAD because of the Rainbooms and CMC.
Well this is odd.
The site shows that this has been updated, yet there's no new chapter. What happened?
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A pressed public by accident.
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Ah! OK.
I hope you have a part where princess Twilight goes mental on the girls when she finds out what happened because a vengeful princess is the last thing they need.
In the holiday story I’m working on for the holidays Rainbow is going to be truamtized by the princess action towards her.
Possibly the most mundane response to what sounds like a damaged blood vessel I've ever heard. Besides, Twilight solves problems through words, not fists.
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Fists always solve my problems!
the rewrite was better