Sneaky.
Sneaky, sneaky.
Slowly moving through the dream realm, I approached the prey I had been tracking for a bit. Slowly rising up through the floor, I spread my wings as I slowly snuck closer before pouncing!
Luna ducked to the side and tackled me in turn with a laugh.
We rolled across the not-floor and I warped not-reality around us, shifting relative size to make it easier to pin her down.
Luna countered and melted away into a cloud of smoke. I quickly followed her, entangling us as we twisted across the not-air and into one of the silver portals.
Rolling across the ground, I turned into a timber wolf and charged. Luna grinned and switched into a little rabbit, bolting into the brambles quickly growing beneath one of the apple trees.
Shrinking down to the size of a rabbit, I charged into the brambles as they kept growing larger than any tree.
Diving into a rabbit hole, Luna escaped the dream and I followed behind and into the next one, turning back into a pony before looking around.
Where was she?
I was in a mansion in Canterlot. I knew this place, it belonged to Fancy Pants, the dream belonged to Fleur.
My hooves sounded soft against the marble floor as I slowly moved along the hallway. Where was she?
I could feel she was close by.
An old pony pounced me out of one of the paintings, swinging his spear.
Not Luna.
I didn’t bother ducking, I just made a hole in the floor so he fell through instead of reaching me.
There!
Diving into the next painting, I found myself back in the space between dreams only to see the top of a tail disappear into nothing.
She had switched Planes.
But which one? Feeling for her distinct solidness in the ever shifting realm of dreams, I started to move slowly through the different planes of dreams until I came to a stop in the griffon one.
Here.
But where?
I slowly looked around and started forward. Luna on the other hand slipped up next to me and nosed at my ear, slipping her wing across my back,
“Well done, My Page.”
“Still got away,” I said and turned my head to kiss her, “You are slippery, My Sky.”
Luna grinned into the kiss before resting her horn against mine, “I do have a bit more experience. But you are learning quickly.”
I winked and switched our sizes, putting my wing around her and pulling her close, my nose against hers, “Just not that sure how useful it is in here.”
“Never know,” she said and smiled up at me, “But it’s more about you practicing in a natural way… and you do like playing tag.”
“Mmm. Like the reward when I win more…”
That got a giggle from her. Something I’m fairly sure very few other ponies have heard from the princess of the night.
“Too bad you didn’t win this time then,” she teased and leaned against me, “How are things in Griffona?”
I nosed at her horn, “Waiting for an answer from the king on the proposal. Don’t expect a yes, but he's likely going to at least agree to see if it can be done. Should be on the way home soon.”
Luna nodded and smiled up at me, “Getting along with the griffons?”
“Yep. Was actually observing some cultural events yesterday.”
Luna raised her eyebrows and looked at me until I clarified,
“…There was a hunt. It was interesting to observer.”
“Not sure I should ask any more questions about that,” Luna admitted, “I know enough about griffons so know where that’s going. Having fun at least?”
“I am,” I admitted and hugged her a bit closer, “Not as much as Sunset is though. She has a whole new set of guards to harass as she explores the city.”
That got a laugh from Luna and she nodded, “That does sound like Sunset Shimmer. Remind me to invite her to dinner with us when you two get back.”
“Luna?”
“She’s still your best friend, I wish to get to know her better.”
I nodded and ran my wing along her back, “Sounds good. Now though… if I didn’t win, then it means that you did…”
“I did, didn’t I…”
OoOoOoOoO... Even Luna wants a piece of Sunny
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Somehow in the several months since this comment, the errors have still not been fixed. Which is why I continue to not read the story itself.
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literally judging books by their covers.
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If the cover of a book has literal errors on it, then that doesn't say much for the contents within, does it? The phrase judging a book by its cover is used to convey judging content without seeing any, but in this case, if the author fails to properly use language on the outside of a book, how can I be expected to enjoy a higher level of quality on the inside?
Princess Luna: Cadance...are you moping?
Princess Cadance: *eating ice cream* Yes...all my plans are not working...Alicorns are not meant to monogamous Luna! How are the rest of us suppose to find new lovers later on if our sole male alicorn will just see it as a betrayal?
Princess Luna: First off...spreading rumors and randomly yelling in the distance "BUCK ALREADY" doesn't count as a "plan"
Princess Cadance: *evil glare*
Princess Luna: And second...I think a different approach is needed.
Princess Cadance: I'm listening...
Princess Luna: Instead of making My Page invite a different pony to bed...I will invite HIM to bed with me and Sunset Shimmer. By me seducing Sunset, Page will learn to open up AND as a bonus, Twilight will no longer feel guilty of the long distance with Sunset.
Princess Cadance: Auntie Luna...YOU ARE A GENIUS!
The visuals here were so fun! Why? Why do I have no time to draw?!
Something, something implied threesome go!
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If your going to complain about not wanting to read a story then maybe just ignore the story and not comment on chapter 29 of said story!
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I didn't comment on chapter 29. I commented while on the story's home page. It defaults to the latest chapter.
And I didn't complain about not wanting to read the story. I complained of the lack of quality in something as simple as the story's description.
I want to read the story. But I never read something with such obvious glaring errors.
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Then stop acting like a special little snowflake and just DON'T read it. You are NOT special, no one cares about your comments. you didn't even write the Author a PM concerning the typos, am I right?
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Whoa guys, chill. No need to insult each other like 10 year olds over a typo. Everyone has their preferences and levels of laziness/ inadequacy. Lets just keep calm and read some MLP fanfiction.
Looks like Luna may be planning on trying to get Sunset in on the idea of a herd with her and Page (probably invite Twilight as well if Sunset joins).
Dream Tag sounds fun.
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God, its so weird come to this story after reading a chapter from something like "Diaries of a Madman."
Makes me wary for literally no reason, even though I know they're completely different characters in this story.
I think you want observe there
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No one cares about YOUR opinion, as well. So why are you replying to someone who wasn't even engaging with you in the first place? Sounds like you're the "special snowflake" here.
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NO U
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Stop being a child. I pointed out errors on a story. I then reminded the author of the errors some months later.
Take your childish insults and go somewhere you won't bother adults please.
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:)
Should they even be doing that in other creatures dreams?
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Funny you should use that emoji considering that one with the apple trees was probably hers. Kinda was hoping they'd tussle so hard they'd roll into Silverlining's dream of Page hunting her. Hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink.
Who ever wins... Both cant lose
Dream sex?
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Having sex while being able to freely bend reality around you? That has to be fan-fucking-tastic.
And it would still count as training.
Can't lose. :D
Edit 2022/08/17
Actually, now that I think about that... Flutters and Discord...
Given that a few chapter's back Page talked about there gravity (sphere of influence) and just how much larger his is. I suspect he's at a bit of a disadvantage in there games. To Luna he must feel like an earthquake as he moves
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These comment sections at times… There are kids running around this site you know?
Maybe a pair of Griffonia guard could be recruited?
Would be good advertising for Blank Page Dream Legion. A multi race military perhaps?