Hmm. Again with the Second Person in the description, but First Person story. I'd really suggest not to do this as it creates false expectations. It's true that the story isn't tagged Second Person either, but lots of authors forget some tags they should put on their stories. Anyway, if the description is "You Do X" and then the story itself isn't, some may feel cheated a little.

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