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My little Bat Pony

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AgentKorpsman

AgentKorpsman #1 · Apr 8th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1: One Life To Another ·

When’s the next chapter?

Please tell me celestia is not going to take his gun away from him.

Flora Blossom

Flora Blossom #2 · Apr 8th, 2023 · · · Chapter 1: One Life To Another ·

First fiction may not be as good, but it will constantly improve when you write more. So, far I like this anyway for the idea of it. I suggest reading other people's fiction to find a writing style or looking for good grammar, etc...

TheGreatSteel