• Member Since 5th Mar, 2018
  • offline last seen May 30th, 2021

Sugar Morning


A curious artist trying her luck on writing stories.. Will she make it? Let's find out!

Comments ( 7 )

Welcome and congrats on your first story!

One thing: You can't link images in the long description.

Yeahh I just realized that XP
Sorry I'm new here XD

8862505 Perfectly fine. We were all new once. You can edit your description on published stories, by the way. :twilightsmile:

Yes. Totally not obvious your sweetheart turned into a dog for you. The same dog you mule kicked in the muzzle. XD

Okay. This was hilarious and I loved the finale. My only suggestion though is work on some of you sentences to make things sound more better. It's not a huge issue but sometimes specific wordings can confuse readers and makes it easier to misspell something or make other grammar errors. Otherwise I hope to see more add - on sequels or short stories to this in the future.

I took no risk letting him outside and cause more chaos, I told Boofy that I was going to just get some dog food, nothing else, so he better 'ACT NORMAL'. You guessed it. Right when I was in the first aisle, he mounted me and humped me. The security pony kicked us out and we couldn't get the dog food. Screw it, I bought him take outs.

That is where the story get's bad because I can't even take it seriously anymore, I mean not sure if it is the humping as in sex or just what dogs do sometimes with a humans leg or other stuff. It was mentioned so casually I didn't liked it for some reason.

I rather enjoyed this story. It was short and sweet.

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