A curious artist trying her luck on writing stories.. Will she make it? Let's find out!
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Welcome and congrats on your first story!
One thing: You can't link images in the long description.
Yeahh I just realized that XP
Sorry I'm new here XD
8862505 Perfectly fine. We were all new once. You can edit your description on published stories, by the way.
Yes. Totally not obvious your sweetheart turned into a dog for you. The same dog you mule kicked in the muzzle. XD
Okay. This was hilarious and I loved the finale. My only suggestion though is work on some of you sentences to make things sound more better. It's not a huge issue but sometimes specific wordings can confuse readers and makes it easier to misspell something or make other grammar errors. Otherwise I hope to see more add - on sequels or short stories to this in the future.
That is where the story get's bad because I can't even take it seriously anymore, I mean not sure if it is the humping as in sex or just what dogs do sometimes with a humans leg or other stuff. It was mentioned so casually I didn't liked it for some reason.
I rather enjoyed this story. It was short and sweet.