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Virtuality Is An Art - One of My Inner Monologues ~ 2K18

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Comment posted by Head of Common Mockery deleted Apr 5th, 2018

So, I’d this humanized? Is this anthro? I’m confused.

Additionally, I like where this is headed, but the mixture of Equestrian and earth names and references makes this kind of hard to follow. If you could fix that, then this would be an amazing story.

He better have a monologue about a business card.

Please learn to use punctuation. It doesn’t even have to be perfectly correct, just use some freaking comas man!

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Understandable this chapter was rushed out to see how it resonated i knew that was a flaw, it will be fixed in further chapters

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As I said earlier it was rushed out. Everything will be covered if further chapters are released.

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