• Published 14th Feb 2018
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The Celestial Comedia- Twilight's Inferno - Equine Speed Runner



Lost in a dark wood, with no way out, Twilight Sparkle must journey through the darkest place with only a single guide.

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Surely those of higher authority than I 37
will laugh and make mockery, a fool’s word 38
they proclaim. Magic Kindergarten would be upon me nigh. 39

That was genius. Pure, beautiful genius :rainbowlaugh:

I'm loving this story, and I really look forward to seeing more of this tale of Twilight's journey. ^_^

8768409
Oh you spotted that? I hoped somebody would. :rainbowkiss:

I hope I can keep up to your expectations. Sometimes when writing this story, especially the purely Equestrian tangents I'm afraid that I'm either getting too close, or maybe my writing isn't quality enough. Feels like barely keeping my head above the water, but I'll work hard to improve my terza rima and writing skills. :twilightsmile:

*Imagines Flim and Flam and Tirek being tortured in hell*

8768482

Where would Tirek go? I could see Flim and Flam in one of the Bolgias.

8768484
Hmm... Tirek would be hard to place. His defining trait is his greed, but it's for magic rather than money. And he's also very wrathful... but also noted for treachery - both to his brother and to Discord. So maybe he'd be in the Caina?

8768484
He would be in one of the bottom levels of hell, being Equestria's closest equvilent to Hitler.

8768534
OOh. Oooooh. I'm going to PM you something.

So... It doesn't take place in Tartarus? Well, you get points for being original. Please respond to this comment.

8768856
Well, Tartarus is not appropriate for most ponies. Also, tartarus is based on greek mythology, and this is a story based on the Catholic afterlife.

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