Batmare turns the Discord in to Arkham Asylum, the nesting ground of Manehattan's supervillains and cesspool of insanity and madness. Suspicious of Discord's easy surrender, Batmare walks with him through the asylum until Discord broke out of his bonds and took over Arkham Island. Running around the island are his henchmen that came from Blackgate Prison, several of Batmare's rogue gallery villains, and him constantly throwing Batmare with trap after trap.
Can Batmare uncover Discord's insane plan that will cost Manehattan's demise and stop him or will she succumb to the numerous criminals running around the entire island, through every section of the asylum trying to find and kill her before she can stop him? Read to find out!
(This story is a remake of my previous story, with better grammar, longer chapters, more dialogue and better story. I deeply apologize of my three year hiatus, I really don't like how my previous story is structured. This story is inspired by Batman: Arkham series with the gameplay of Batman Arkham Videos, story of the comics and dialogue from the game, enhanced by yours truly)
I do not own Batman or My Little Pony. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Lauren Faust and Hasbro and Batman is owned by DC Comics.
Hey guys, I have something to tell you.
Recently, I came across another My Little Pony/Batman: Arkham crossover called Masked Matterhorn: Tartarous Asylum by StarPhantom. I read through the first chapter and saw that the first chapter is the EXACT same chapter I used for my previous story. Chapter title, characters, EVERY single word, sentence, and paragraph is from MY story! Worst of all, he didn't even acknowledges or gave source to me, he didn't even mentioned me! Blatantly stole my story and just slapped on a few tweaks and titles and just going around posted his 'story' as his own!
But, I would've expect more like him trying to steal from me and going around posting stories as their own. Will someone kindly show me how do I keep my story, new, to avoid thieves like him from stealing my stories? It will be extremely helpful if someone tell me how.
pm the owner of the site give him a link to your story and the story with the plagiarism give it like a day and his account will be banned Pretty easy to prove to since chapters have the dates they were originally uploaded other than that there is no wa to 'stop' others from copying your story
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also done pmed a admin should have a nice cross through his user name be tommorow
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Thanks so much, bro! I will do more once either me or the readers spotted any stories that plagiarizes mine.
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Sure it wasn't a coincidence, maybe he just had the same idea..
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I'm sure, I mean. I'm all up for adoption of abandoned stories and inspirations, but his story copied every single word from my old version. Whether you have time, compare my old version to his. I hope I'm not overreacting too much over this, I mean, I hadn't update that story for nearly three years but at least give credit to the original fanfiction writer.
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I read it a day ago, I think he changed it after finding out if was pretty similar to yours.
Guys, I've got some bad news.
Unfortunately, my nephew is sick and is now in a hospital in Plano and I took some days off from college to go see him until he recovers. So, because of this...I am unable to complete the new chapter. I understand that all of you were waiting for the new chapter coming up and I was ready to post it but I hope you guys can understand. I can't do anything while my family is in trouble.
So, please hang on a little bit longer. Give or take, Friday or Saturday around 7 p.m., I will post the chapter. Once again, as an author, I deeply apologize for this comeuppance. As soon as my nephew recovers and I finish with my college work, I will post new chapters weekly until the story is completed the best I can.
Last time, I deeply apologize. Thank you all for the favorites and receiving over 100 views! Thank you guys for the six followers!! You guys are awesome.
And as always, KEEP CALM AND BE THE BATMARE!!
Also, yes, I did edit these chapters. I decide to make Filthy Rich the mayor, because I see him more greedy for money and power, like Quincy Sharp. Mayor Mare, I decide to lean more on the Two-Face. He's a better replacement.
You made a mistake in the synopsis. It's not "the" Discord. It's just Discord.
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Thanks, man for the feedback! I'm so sorry for this long hiatus. Busy with college, band and stuff. I will re-edit the names and grammatical errors so I can make the dialogue and narrative more coherent and not cringe-worthy. Thanks for the comment! I hope you enjoy so far.
May your uncle rest in peace
Excellent chapter
The synopsis confuses me. What does any of that have to with Flurry Heart, Pinkie, and Twilight?
So does that mean your cancelling your previous story in favor of this one. Dang that's sad but your the author i did love your other one i found it fun and entertaining. Oh well i'll gladly read this one as long as the core of you story has the same love and patience your original story had.
Now i curious who's your "Riddler" you stated Twilight/Batmae is Bruce Wayne/Batman, Shing Armor is Jim Gordan, Flurry Heart/Oracle as Barbara Gordon/Oracle, Discord is Joker, Pinkie pie is Harley Quinn, Prince Blueblood as Victor Zasz, Garble as Killer Croc, Filthy Rich as Warden Quincey Sharp (though honestly i would've chosen Spoiled Rich as she fits Sharp's personality better), Zecora as The Scarecrow, and obviously you chose Nightlight and Twilight Velvet as the Waynes. I'm really cuious who will you choose to play the riddler/Edward Nigma also who is going to be your Poison Ivy. My bet is on Rarity or Fluttershy because their personality are facets of poison Ivy one is all about perfection and the other loves all things nature. I hope Iron will becomes Bane
Next chapter?