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Bleddyn
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Aww only one of them had some morning nookie. Still a nice story though. I hope to read more from you soon.
Should keep it going
I hope you would consider continuing this story. I feel like there's a lot of potential here for cute shenanigans and I really want to see Mystique and Sunny Breeze developed more as characters.
Really fun, well-written story and while the amnesia effect was a little weird and out of left field it's still a great story.
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Well, the poor lad was still a bit off in the head. Maybe if Mystique hadn't said anything there might have been a bit more fun.
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Actually I do plan on continuing. Currently debating on contacting the admins about confirming it's ok to open this up as "incomplete" or going the route of each short in a continuation of this. I'd prefer to go the first route, since it will make continuity easier on everyone.
As for the amnesia; keep in mind that Cadance and Lovestruck showed up and explained what happened the night before to Summer Breeze and Mystique while David was unconscious. He wouldn't have known, and he did interrupt Cadance as she was trying to explain what happened.
I will say this; I don't particularly care for when a major event happens in a story and it's never explained. There will be closure as to why the charm Lovestruck used messed up like it did. Also, keep in mind Lovestruck was drunk off her plot that night too.
Thank you all for reading!
your, your wounds for the love of god
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Oh snap! Thank you for catching that. I run these through a spell checker automatically and proofread them myself and still miss little mistakes like this. I appreciate you catching this one and will get the typo fixed ASAP.
That was a great fanfic and kinda wish there was a sequel because kinda wanna see the three being happy in love more then what was written