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Zpothu


If I ever saw a therapist, he’d leave the room saying: “That guy’s creepier than three Draculas, two Count Choculas, and an Alucard.”

Comments ( 29 )

You know what, just because those five deserved it, faved. And I normally avoid these kinds of stories.

8649331
The wtf fanfic cometh, behold, behold.

8649696
I love your comment. I laughed. :rainbowlaugh:

I think it would have been better if she had turned her self in to a single larger snake to truly be the predator in the ending witch would probably been more direct data to study and direct pleasure for her. But over all interesting toucher snuff fiction.

8650157
Good point, that actually would have worked. If I could go back, I would have gone that route. :facehoof: We'll call that an alternate ending and just imagine it so I don't have to write it. lol

8650509
Or you could write a short alternate ending chapter. Or do you have trouble writing vore.

8651201
Thanks, but I’ll take a pass on this one. I would have trouble writing non-slutty vore because this is the first time I’ve tried it. I could describe the snake eating in depth, but I have no creative or erotic angle that would make it interesting enough. I’m no stranger to appending alternate endings and deleted scenes to the end of chapters, but not this time. You can write it if you want.

8651360
I could easily actually I got myself start writing doing vore role play or ekas portal. It be easier then writing actual sex so if your granting permission I be happy to write it and send it you in pm when it's done. I can even add some little sadistic flair with her getting closer and closer to cuming as she eats and they digest graphically. Even taunting them. Also have a idea for after the digestion when she turns back to normal.

8651546
Oh good, I’m pleasantly surprised by your offer to make a contribution. Whatever you hand in is fine; it’ll be appended to the end of the chapter with your name for everyone to see, or it can be the next chapter. If it turns out you’re not up for it, just let me know.

8651709
Ok ill write it up might take a bit ill pm when done

8651709
K in you in box fresh from the press might have been a little carried away with the vary end but it adds a feeling of bigger purpose to the events as a whole. If you want me to work with you to expand on the story based on the ending I wrote just ask now back to the moths long grind of writing suntrixlight three some chapter of one of my own stories. Thanks for letting me guest write that alternate ending hope you like it it was a good change of pace for me and fun to write.

I have a great idea for a good ending just before sour sweet is swallowed by one of the snakes sunny flare rips off one of the gargoyles dildos and stabs both the snakes eyes but upon tearing the dildo off she notices the statue had fell and broke with a chaos emerald lying in the remains so they start smashing the statues while fighting off the snakes and receive all 7 chaos emeralds so they start deciding who should turn super and in the end sour sweet does and with the power of the chaos emeralds she blows up the snakes blasts midnight Sparkle into space and frees her friends from hell. after that they all go round to indigos to masturbate to Michael Rosen (later that day the chaos emeralds were stolen by Dr Robotnik) The End (for now)

8653334
That was fuckin hilarious from the moment you said chaos emerald. This reminds of how most videogames work on arena bosses. In Banjo-kazooie it was the Jinjos. In this context of this story, very funny.

8653334
Only catch I wrote the "good ending" lol

8653680
How is twilight becoming a snake a good ending?

I have to conclude that the majority of vore fetishists have about as much creative skill as the typical corpulent fanboy in pretty much every fandom in existence. The difference being that there is a far lower complement of mediocre-to-competent creative agencies within the vore subset as compared to the others.

8654885
I object to that sir, I am not corpulent. But you're right about how much we suck.

8654599
Yeah, notice he said "good ending" in quotes.

8655060
No but how... it’s just a bunch of the same ending

Only one thing for it I will have to travel to the past and change it then the future will be good preventing the shadowbolts death and Dr Robotnik receiving the seven chaos emeralds and then enslaving Equestria

Plot twist

8655248
But the death in mine is actually a good thing.

8655282
How?!?! Did one of them survive or something?

8654901 There is something called 'effort' which tends to give a better result. I at least appreciate it when people try their hardest.

8655408
So Irony stole the Shadowbolts Pleasure leaving something the Shadowbolts couldn’t do leaving the Shadowbolts to die without pleasure but the ending states that twilight is going to show the results of an experiment which i’m Guessing is the remains of the Shadowbolts


Am I Right?

8655491

I pm you the explanation so not ruin it for others

8655410
I also noticed that pictures, comics, and vids are more popular then writing in the vore community.

8986637 The easy answer is that the stories are almost all cookie-cutter copies of a couple very basic plot lines, atrocious characterization, an utter lack of even internal plausibility, horribly forced and unnatural tension... or none at all... and predators who tend to be immune to every single mode of attack 'because fetish Plot Armor'.

They're 99.9% garbage.

8986911
Look up a artist named Karbo on either deviant art, Amazon, or Ekas portal. He actually has a world built that uses for graphic novels sadly I can't spell the name right of the top of my head.

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