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Me: Awe, it’s nice to have a new author :3
Inner Me: Destoy his confidence!
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very funny I actually laughed at that.
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Don't worry. I'm a big joker. I forgot to read this, but I may as well now
That was bad. Rushed, prose was clunky and hard to read, and... I don't know what to say about your dialogue.
When writing dialogue, you usually want to put the speaking action (he/she/it said) behind the dialogue.
I don't know if this is the correct way, but I usually put an action before my dialogue.
Yeah, so. If you ever need some tips, I can help and so can several groups on the site.
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Okay good to know
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I am probably going to rewrite this someday. Probably soon when I get some help with writing.
I don't know about in the story, but for the description you have not capitalised any names.
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Lol guess that’s my cue to not read this. I don’t support scam artists.
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scam artists?
You're clearly new to this. Nothing wrong with that but this feels AI generated because it uses too many hot button (no pun intended) words.