• Published 16th Nov 2017
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Supreme Commander of the Multiverse - Zedfire



Being Displaced 101: It's not all glamour when you head into Equestria as the most powerful being that they have ever seen, there are some shit parts too. I think I know that best...

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Comments ( 26 )

0,0 YES :D This Seems Good!!! Will Watch

more please my dear writer. take your time though, writing should not be rushed.

More please.

MORE BEFORE I SICK YUNO GASAI ON YOUR ASS!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Commander UEF UEON CYBRAN all classic

Before I start reading, does the equipment he use come from the first game or the second?

This seems good, but it also feels a little rushed.

I'll see where this goes so i'll reserve my full judgement to be used at a later date

I sense that this guy would hate my Invictus Displaced.

After all, Invictus’s Prime Command is that he must destroy all other Commanders, and Equestria has a bunch of them, and so he’s attacking his Equestria n stuff....
Yeah, he wouldn’t like Invictus at all...

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if your still waiting well it comes from Find out by reading it

I think I heard something that wasn't supposed to be there, "build additional pylons" there it goes agian

CORE Commander send : Request alliance with Cybran Commander -01

_Purpose : Equestria Defense _Confirm {Y}-{N}


Print/

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Pfft... you think?!

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Confirm {Y}-{N}
Alliance Approved

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Continue story_confirm {Y}-{N}
Story already in the works and will be released Febuary or sooner.
Depending on several factors.

Update someday? :rainbowderp:

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*taps foot* it's past February :ajbemused: ..... AND IT'S ALMOST THE END OF FUCKING APRIL!? :flutterrage:

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Hey! I got not only sidetracked, but also school and family matters. I promise it will be released soon, but I don't know when! So hold your horses please!

Greetings Commander Zedfire, would you kindly proceed with the writing upon this story? You may take as long as you wish to complete this mission. May Kane watch over us.

I love this story are you going to update it

Yay a cyberin fic.:twilightsheepish:

do the next chapter:raritystarry:

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