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DUDE.

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You never go ass-to-mouth.

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So many lolz

I stopped reading a few paragraphs in. The writing doesn't flow whatsoever, and really needs to be cleaned up.

I wish I could fuck a chick so hard that all the windows in my house shattered.

I was going to suggest that you work on showing-not-telling, but now that I'm actually thinking about it, showing any of this wouldn't improve things all that much.

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seems a little lacking.

Well... That was odd to say the least

Team Rocket's blasting off again!!!

The hell?

Only one thing can be said: Trollololololololol... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png

This was the worst thing I have ever read on this site.
Today.

Ass blood? WTF!?