“Ya’ll have pretty eyes, mister!” The child blurted out.

Y'all is plural.

Cool story so far. Keep it up!

I feel like Darth Marr is a name i've heard before.

Thanks for pointing that out. 8541983 I'll fix that when I get the chance. And thanks for the compliment! I put in quite a few hours to get this story right. Im glad that my story has gotten such an outstanding response. :)

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I read your previous story with Corpus and wanted to see what your remake could do hasn't disapointed so far.