You are a human named Alex, works as an assistant tailor in the Rarity boutique, as well as being a Handyman for his past work experiences.. As more than just his fair share gains.
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8524544
I know. i hoping to find an editor to help me solve my writing problems. English is not first Language.
Thanks for comments.
8545097
Thanks for comments. English is not my first language. and in fact I'm looking for an editor that can help me somehow. because with the translation on the site I am written in a different way is frustrating and confusing readers. thanks for being past.
well, whatever you have plan on us I hope it good.
YOu know, i have one question. Is this a harem clopfic?
8550409
exactly as well as. but I'm going for grades but this story and a harem clopfics.
8547251
do not worry I just hope that what I write is pleasing to you readers.
8550413
Yes!! Thank you. MAybe you could have Queen Chrysalis in it? ANd i cant wait for him to learn about herds.
8550413
And I'm just wondering, what is your first language?
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I can say that following the series, Queen Chrysalis will make its appearance, more I can not say for not spoiler. but there will be some herds and situations.
to answer the other question. my first and italian language.
Thanks for you comments.
i have happy or respond you question ^^
8550439
ok. Fine with me. And cool on Italian. I think its an interesting language
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By the way, i have written a few stories myself that you could use to help you grammar.
8550439
Well, if you ever want suggestions for mares for him to meet, don't hesitate to ask. I have a whole list of my favorite characters in MLP. Like, make him meet Zecora. That would be interesting.
Murdered English is murdered
8550449
very well. let's talk about Pm for ^ ^
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ok.
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serious. already English is not my mother tongue. I'm looking for an editor to help me improve and I'm trying to avoid making mistakes. as constructive criticism and really low help .
8550763 Well there is always Grammarly, either the APP or the download will help you find errors when you type, there is the free version and the subscription version, either of those will help you find errors.
The first chapter says its edited but I see no difference from the other chapters. Either you didn’t replace the old chapter with the new one or you have a lazy/terrible editor.
And if you did the editing, get someone else to do it as it can be difficult for one to spot their own mistakes.
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I replaced the old chapter with the new one
8551114
I can be a temporary editor if you want.
PM the chapters
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I would like to thank you for this new information.
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thank you for your help. I'll send you the first chapter in the evening.
I have to ask, Applejack has some freckles, and it wouldn't be much of a surprise honestly, do she also has freckles on her chest or near her crouch? I think she would look adorable if she does
Ok, This is a good story so far, However I think your going too far with this paragraph.
I can't tell you how to write your stories, but I have to say that when writers have cannon characters kiss an OC,s butt like this it always feels wrong. It pulls the reader out of the story because its so unrealistic. It ALWAYS makes me think of a Gary Stu and in my humble opinion it weakens the Character
Just my 2 Cents
The Monk
That was another awesome and sweet read Ihope he makes a herd soon .Ican't wait to read the next chapter.
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