You are a human named Alex, works as an assistant tailor in the Rarity boutique, as well as being a Handyman for his past work experiences.. As more than just his fair share gains.
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Crap!! Bring the noise!! Run man run!!
what gonna happen to next chapter? it going down hill.
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is there any problem with the chapter? to settle ?.
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Just some grammar. i know the translation isn't easy.
Most of what I've seen of Rarity, canon or not, is that she is very good at manipulating.
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yeah. this right.
Pronoun trouble!!!!!!! Your use of he, she, him, and her you changed the gender of everyone like several times by this simple mistake but it’s still a good story
that was a awesome read .
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thanks for you comments
Missing letter : Julian
Word spacing
Minor error : She
Word spacing
Minor error : to
the story is... OK so far, but i am going to hazard a guess that English is not your native language. There are a lot of grammar and structure problems with this story, and words that should not be used.
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To be fair, I have seen a LOT worse here..