You are a human named Alex, works as an assistant tailor in the Rarity boutique, as well as being a Handyman for his past work experiences.. As more than just his fair share gains.
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Okay first of all, it's great your story is back again, BUT JESUS CHRIST YOU REALLY NEED TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITING DUDE!!
I mean, the way you're addressing Alex as "She" and the mares as "He", is really messed up, - no, is really FUCKED UP! Look I don't mean to sound very rude and maybe English is not your first language, but you should consider to be careful when you're writing. That's why you're getting some dislikes.
you keep flipping back and forth between gender usages for you say him or he then in the next sentence you'll say she and her especially during the spike flashback
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in fact, English is not my mother tongue
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in fact, my max error is write . why English is not my mother tongue. and i problem with translate this site and translate.
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I see, well let me give you an advise, before you post a new chapter you should look for a proofreader to help you with your writing. Furthermore, I know this sounds pretty hard for you but try to practice English so you can get better with the way you're narrating the story.
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I tried to request an available proofreader. so far no success.
it be awhile. who the mares will alex encounter next chapter?
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um. Well. if any reader would have preference or tell me who he might like it would also be good for the construction of the new chapters.
I hope Mayormare gets pregnant,I loved this chapter.