You are a human named Alex, works as an assistant tailor in the Rarity boutique, as well as being a Handyman for his past work experiences.. As more than just his fair share gains.
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There's a little pronoun problem here, and for once, neither of them are "you" and "I."
Most chapters nowadays are having that same problem still and with he and she ,his and her in the newest chapters gets hard to tell who’s talking
Rarity stood in front of his beloved, wrapping his arms around his neck, his face a few inches away from Alex's
This one makes it seem like they’re both male
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*nods* i see
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I'm glad you like the story and I hope you'll continue to like it in the next few chapters. I am open to suggestions. advice and opinions to improve writing and history.
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But I accept advice, suggestions to make good characters (including the mane 6). but we'll talk in detail for PM.
That was epic/sweet I loved it.
she,her
her tail , her tail is really soft
"You like what you see," shesaid,opening her legs, her horn lights up once more and the black loincloth fades to reappear on top of the pile of clothes, Alex blushes more, while Luna slides a hand slowly on her chest towards her wet mare
h, damn you're resisting not giving in." she said seductive. she stood up slowly and returned to the podium, her hips swinging from side to side as she returned to the table, giving Alex a seductive look
This is where the long chapters begin.