You are a human named Alex, works as an assistant tailor in the Rarity boutique, as well as being a Handyman for his past work experiences.. As more than just his fair share gains.
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You have a serious pronoun problem.
You keep getting him his and her Mixed up and keep referring to her marehood as her mare so much it was hard to read it is easy to tell English is not your first language please get an editor either that or you’re spellcheck from your phone is destroying your story
What?
I feel happy for alex helping the poor mare in pain. also who will alex gonna fuck mares next?
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I know. The translate error frequency... sorry.
Its funny, plenty of people have posted paragraphs and criticized the translation, but not one of you has had the courtesy to clean it up and post the corrected paragraph for the Author to fix that part of the story. Come on people, if your going to criticize, at least help to fix it. Just bitching at the guy solves nothing, especially since he has told you in the description that english isn't his language.
Im sorry people, but the older I get the less patience I have for people being stupid.
The Monk
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Not really. My morning just consist of me waking up, checking the time, looking outside my door and saying...
“Huh, It’s morning already.”
And then immidiatley fall back asleep
are you plan on update chapter?
So far a good read (up to “Confessions and comfort friends (Editor correct)”) . I had gone through this/these twice and only found a few grammatical and he/she gender confusions (not enough to make me stop reading) errors at this point . Only minor confusion but good so far .
Reading half way (maybe less) through “Meeting the Spa. Peace Before The Storm”; I decide to stop since I really couldn’t get through all the he/she gender confusion errors . Making me loose interest in what was (and could still be ) very good reading material. I’ll try jumping ahead and see if the rest are ok but I feel like I’ll be missing out on some good scenes along the way . Hope they get fixed soon. Maybe I’ll try my hand at editing ❓.
Aside from my comments about it, this has been very good to read (both times) to a certain chapter. Thanks and hope you get the hope you need .
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Yeah, there are a lot of grammar errors because editing these chapters haven't exactly been my priority these last... 6 months.
I think the gender confusion comes from the author using a translator that's not designed for texts. Somethings I'm not even sure how to translate a specific sentence.
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There’s no worries. I’ve seen grammatical errors before so that’s not to dig of a deal for me . That’s just part of the comments about it .
Yeah, the only thing that was getting me more was the gender confusion. You may be right but I think the author was translating word-for-word cause I’ve tried translating sentences and they seem to work for me. But the author might not have that option so it’s understandable .
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I'll do my best to correct the next chapter soon, but I have an exam tomorrow and I really need to study.
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Like I said before, no worries . You have to take care of your things first before anything else so your good . You did a good job on the ones you worked on before so keep up the good work . Good luck on your test too .
That was a sweet,cute ,epic and awesome read.Iloved it Iwas hopeing he bang Miss Cake Ihope there's a flashback of him doing that.
This is a great story but I hate to say this it need a hard edit job the story great but a lot of the problem I see is the he and she are all in the wrong place its keep saying the main 6 are he and Alex a she so on it be a great story it just need a bit of a polish sorry am no expert when it comes to writing am if u think what am wrong that fair it's you work not mine it's just what I read and seen that what I think need work on