• Member Since 21st Oct, 2011
  • offline last seen Nov 6th, 2022

Prony Boy


Bisexual Brony. I'll read just about anything. No, seriously.

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When Storm Stripe moves into Ponyville, it isn't long before he's invited to his first "Pinkie Party". But when the party is over, he finds Pinkie Pie feeling surprisingly sad, and offers to cheer her up as best as he can. What he doesn't know is that he isn't helping Pinkie Pie, but Pinkamina Diana Pie....who intends to use Storm Stripe's offer for her own, dark, plan.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 24 )

Why does The Description Sound so amazing to me?

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I'm glad you like it~
Trying to give insight into the story without spoiling it is hard for me...

Oh HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELL NO!

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i Must Say, i Found it Quite Alright, and it makes Me want to give writing a Try(well, Starting with grim, that Is)
So, I shall look into that Aswell, and If it werenmt for me Beeing on an iPod, i'd Point out mistakes,
If i found any...
So sorry, NO constructive criticism Next... 12 or more hours

SHITS GONNA GET REAL FAM!!!

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I'm having a hard time understanding what your talking about.... :applejackunsure:

SAY WHAAAAAAAAT!

No, not Vinyl, not Scratchie, please don't hurt her!

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Good Question...
Congratulations, you have convinced me to write a sequel!
And all it took were two words....

That's why I hate Pinkie Pie, she always kills somepony. Bitch.

This story needs more views and more likes. I really enjoyed it!
You have no idea how happy it makes me the story says Pinkamina, and not Pinkamena.
You see, in my eyes they are two different things. Pinkamena just being Pinkie's full name and nothing more than that.
While Pinkamina for me is actually Pinkie's second personality.
I wish more people used this name. :pinkiecrazy:

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Yeah...when the story was written, some ideas that were mean't to be scrapped turned into alternate endings. That way, I could have my cake and eat it too.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I was actually surprised how well written this story is. You may want to look at the first few chapters and replace some errorous "to" with "too", but other than that, there was a pretty good flow. I just wish it was a little longer.
I'd definitely give it five Derpys (if I wasn't on a phone doing this). But instead, the most I can give you right now is a like and a gratz on a riveting story.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
This was the first story I had wrote in a long time, so mistakes are a given.
I did have an editor, but at the time, I didn't bother checking his work (a mistake on my part).

2088927her full name (canon )is pinkamena diane pie. PINKAMENA diane pie. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I feel sick to the stomach now... Uhhg why'd I have to read the 20% more grimdark chapter, anyways

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