I'm liking the new story so far, but Spike never having had an erection before or not knowing it is is a bit of stretch, just because he's terrified of women doesn't mean he never would have gone through sex ed.
8405525 I remember that anime. I'm just glad Spike's just afraid and not so much allergic to them. And I had my share of issues with it, like him getting belittled by a rich perverted pretty boy who can't touch men, putting up with abuse from his temperamental buxom childhood friend, and other things
First chapter I thought might be a bit slow, because i havent seen the show, but it didnt put me off.
Then I got to the second chapter, and I thought I was reading a Blackadder episode with Starwirl, I had to pause a couple minutes just to recover from laughing.
If Spike is not affected by Equestrian females, does that mean Adagio might be assisting him sometime, and who would school counciler be? Zecora? who might want to try even harder to help him in depth?
This seems promising, I have gynophobya myself although Spikes is a bit more serious then mine (no sex education!?). You will need to have a good explanation as to why Spike is not afraid of Sunset however.
"Probably 'cause I'm just in a towel." Sunset suggested, grinning cheekily, "A cute little thing like me is sure to be harmless like this."
Now, where are those dragon-predator urges when you need them?
Sunset quickly threw her hands up in a placating gesture, "Easy, Twi! Just trying to cut a little of the tension in here. No one's gonna get any answers if we're all freaking out. So it was either that," She grabbed the knot holding her towel up, "Or I drop towel."
I would be okay with that.
Good story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!
8407146 There a japanese term called kemonomimi, basically a human with animal/monster parts like Monster Musume or Felicia from Darkstalker. They can have tails, claws, paws, animal ears, fangs, wings, animal eyes, animal sense/habit.
I haven't read it yet but my advice remove the Equestria Girls tag and put either Human or Anthro instead
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It is specifically a magically altered EqG world. So...technically EqG AU.
Yes, the AU tag should be added.
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Okay then
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If it helps, go look up #1046205 and #25237 on derpibooru for a basic idea of what they'll look like
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That second one would make an excellent cover art unless/until you get one specific for this story.
Interesting can't wait for more
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fool's lucky if you ask me at least he has an excuse for not having a girlfriend, I have wears luck with women then most people I know.
Ok, now I'm really, really liking this story!
Spike doesn't know what a boner is that is just sad
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It's two different girls he's referring to.
I can relate to Spike; I'm also afraid of the opposite sex but for a different reason. A reason only known as Third-Wave Feminism. Dun-dun-duuun!
I'm liking the new story so far, but Spike never having had an erection before or not knowing it is is a bit of stretch, just because he's terrified of women doesn't mean he never would have gone through sex ed.
Alright, I wasn't sure about this one at first. But here comes Sunset Shimmer to the rescue! I'm definitely following this story.
This looks interesting but if it turns into a "sex scene every chapter" kind of setup, i'm gonna get board quickly.
Clop is all good and great but if it's all that's there then why bother to write a plot to begin with?
So, this is the EqG world. So, can you explain why everyone are half-breeds?
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I have a feeling there's going to be more sexual situations than actual sex. I just hope we get actual sex.
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There will be sex scenes, but it'll be a lil bit before they arrive.
the artifact jammed the portal open a bit, so magic's been trickling in from equestria for a long time.
Sunset was so bold to Spike
8405454 Tell me
Is this inspired by Girls Bravo? Cause the concept sounds very familiar to me.
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Bingo. Though, while I thought the idea was interesting, the way the show played it out pissed me off.
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It's been years since I last saw it, so, don't remember too much.
8405525 I remember that anime. I'm just glad Spike's just afraid and not so much allergic to them. And I had my share of issues with it, like him getting belittled by a rich perverted pretty boy who can't touch men, putting up with abuse from his temperamental buxom childhood friend, and other things
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Yeah, luckily this time the childhood friend's looking out for him, though more 'petite' than buxom.
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Here's hoping for none of girls find out of how big he is.
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two words:
Locker Room
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Also the female teachers, counselor, school nurse, staff, students, etc.
Spoiler Alert: Spike gets over his fears by impregnating 40% of the student body within the first 2 weeks.
First chapter I thought might be a bit slow, because i havent seen the show, but it didnt put me off.
Then I got to the second chapter, and I thought I was reading a Blackadder episode with Starwirl, I had to pause a couple minutes just to recover from laughing.
If Spike is not affected by Equestrian females, does that mean Adagio might be assisting him sometime, and who would school counciler be? Zecora? who might want to try even harder to help him in depth?
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Well, I guess that proves even the greatest and wisest can make stupid mistakes.
Interesting. I'll see where this goes
This seems promising, I have gynophobya myself although Spikes is a bit more serious then mine (no sex education!?). You will need to have a good explanation as to why Spike is not afraid of Sunset however.
Interesting so far .
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No worries, me and Tatsurou have it worked out
Now, where are those dragon-predator urges when you need them?
I would be okay with that.
Good story so far.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
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There a japanese term called kemonomimi, basically a human with animal/monster parts like Monster Musume or Felicia from Darkstalker. They can have tails, claws, paws, animal ears, fangs, wings, animal eyes, animal sense/habit.
This is good...
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* kemonomimi.
God Sunset is so naughty... I like it.
God damn you. On one hand, I think you watch too much anime, but on the other... I can't help but love how innocent Spike is
This is getting epic can't wait to see where this goes.