Twilight groaned. "Some people like to sleep with their feet uncovered, Sunset." She curled back up against the slumbering boy's side, eager to get back to sleep herself.
"Yeah, but...with their feet sticking a foot off the end?"
Okay, yeah, that is a valid question, and also a slightly worrying one as well.
9184847 Deathly afraid of females. His parents probably had no idea of how to even approach the Talk, which in normal situations can still be awkward as hell for all involved.
"Quite. Oh! Where are my manners...? My name is Rarity, and I really should apologize for my friend's rather...exuberant first impression. Not to disparage her, but Pinkie can be a bit like a puppy around newcomers. She means well, just...well, you saw yourself.
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"i'm really sorry, Spike!" Sunset said for the ninth time once they'd coaxed him out. "I forgot to remind Pinkie about 'personal space'!"
Once they changed to sleepwear (and Twilight told Sunset she couldn't sleep nude that night) the three of them were soon curled up on the makeshift king bed, each girl curling up with Spike in the middle and his arms around them. It wasn't long before all three were sound asleep.
Would make a cute picture!
Good chapter! I'm curious about what is happening to Spike at the end...
"So he wasn't shy, just scared?" Pinkie asked, letting out a sheepish giggle. "Eheh...whoopsie?"
"I don't think he ever really learned about anything like that. Me and Twilight got into a...'disagreement' about something earlier today and he saw us both topless, but all he gave 'huh'." She scratched her head. "I mean, he didn't even know why his body was reacting like it did!"
I feel like there is something missing between these two paragraphs maybe it’s just my imagination? Can’t wait to see what happens next!
9872578 Standard thing in fanfiction's if there is a character the writer didn't like they use the bashing method where the character the writer didn't like get a karma strike from minor insults to judgement brought upon them in levels from 1 to 10 if i had to guess this was a class 5 bashing
Going good so far. Keep up the good work.
I really hope Rainbow gets nothing from Spike. I just to not care of for her in this story.
Growth Spurt, Greed-Inducing Bigness, or The Molt Effect?
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You sir get a cookie.
Lightning Dust just isn’t going to do herself any favors in this fic, is she?
Something tells me that Spike in this fic is more than what he seems.
IT'S ALIVE!
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2 exceptions at the moment.
So something is going on while he sleeps huh? Also how big are his feet now?
So Lightning Dust will be the butt monkey of this story or will she become the comic chew toy and nothing good happens to her?
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mostly this'll be her last scene for a while.
Is Starlight gonna be in this?
Me thinks AJ would make a good bodyguard once he's comfortable around her.
Nice. Very nice!
He is getting bigger? Ok but WHY does he have no sex education!
We are going to need a bigger bed!
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...And some stronger metal doors.
Perfect 👌🏻
Okay, yeah, that is a valid question, and also a slightly worrying one as well.
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Deathly afraid of females. His parents probably had no idea of how to even approach the Talk, which in normal situations can still be awkward as hell for all involved.
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It was meant as a joke.
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no worries, that'll be explained in the next chapter
complete with Twilight facepalming for forgetting about it.
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Greed. Another form for dragon's greed is harem based.
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Ah, my mistake.
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Son of a bitch, I forgot about that. Thanks!
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"I'm"
Would make a cute picture!
Good chapter!
I'm curious about what is happening to Spike at the end...
In the last chapter you introduced Ember.
Do you think she would look like this?
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Source.
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somewhat close to that pic.
9184354 Doesn't look like it. Is she going to be the punching bag of this story?
9185486 That didn't even cross my mind.
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not really. that's gonna be her last scene for a little while.
I'm curious how Spike is not afraid of Sunset.
Twilight i understand.
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Gotta remember, Sunset's not native to that reality.
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Oh gotcha.
Nice
"So he wasn't shy, just scared?" Pinkie asked, letting out a sheepish giggle. "Eheh...whoopsie?"
"I don't think he ever really learned about anything like that. Me and Twilight got into a...'disagreement' about something earlier today and he saw us both topless, but all he gave 'huh'." She scratched her head. "I mean, he didn't even know why his body was reacting like it did!"
I feel like there is something missing between these two paragraphs maybe it’s just my imagination? Can’t wait to see what happens next!
That was a cute meeting chapter. But I feel sorry for Lightning Dust .
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Standard thing in fanfiction's if there is a character the writer didn't like they use the bashing method where the character the writer didn't like get a karma strike from minor insults to judgement brought upon them in levels from 1 to 10 if i had to guess this was a class 5 bashing