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Heroes of Aurora: The Druken Bear

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The Ascendent

The Ascendent #1 · Jul 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Nice setting and nice one shot. Hopefully we see more.

Rye Snoot

Rye Snoot #2 · Jul 23rd, 2017 · · ·

It's alright fiction 7/10 ish T_T could be done a little bit better, but it's average.

errant

errant #3 · Jul 24th, 2017 · · ·

You have an interesting setting for a one-shot. There are enough clues dropped in the fic about guilds, wars, countries, and that kind of stuff to pique my curiosity and make me want to know more about it. The primary characters are also pretty interesting.

There are some spelling/grammar issues, but nothing bad enough to kill the story. For example, "I heard her squeak at an “Eek!” as I did so" should be out and " drinking are brews " should be our.

This would be something that could be really interesting if you fleshed it out. As it stands, I give it a solid 7.5/10. Good job!

The Force