This story is basicaly a what if story, which shows the story of Mlp Fim. To be exact an angle from the side of Luna.
Just a brony who likes the english version of Mlp Fim more than the german version and writes for fun.
This story is basicaly a what if story, which shows the story of Mlp Fim. To be exact an angle from the side of Luna.
I guess English must not be your first language. You should probably go find an editor or a prereader before publishing another chapter. This is almost unreadable.
Sorry I will try to do better next time and I will improve this