• Published 19th Jul 2017
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A bat in pony fur - Germanbrony2001



Fluttershy is again a vampire but this time she want to share it with her friends

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Interlude

Interlude: Settling in

The next morning

Rainbow awoke after a long nap, even by her standards. She felt weird. She tried to stand up and after a while she
succeed . “Shh. Everything will be soon okay my servant.” Said a voice, which sounded to Rainbow like an angelic choir.
“If I can stay with you my queen it will.” Rainbow replied.
“Oh, your cute. You know you don’t have to be soo submissive. If you see me as your queen you can keep your personality.” Her queen stated. Rainbow felt a buzz and she felt more in control.
“Huw. Thanks Flutters. This was weird. So, what exactly happen?” Rainbow asked.
“Your welcome. Well, I found a red Rubin and when I touched it there was a voice in my head which told me to convert you and this is.” Flutterbat told Rainbow.
“Wait convert?”
“Yeah.”
“But I haven’t changed!”
“Are you sure?”
“Yeah, I mean my wings feel stronger and I can hear water dropping but this doesn’t mean I have bat wings and fluffy ears, right?” Flutterbat chuckled. “I have, haven’t I?”
” Yeah, you have.”
"I hate myself sometimes.”
“It isn’t that bad really, I mean you have to drink blood sometimes but you see some cute things, like you hypnotized. And besides don’t you want to be like your queen and help her convert our friends?” Flutterbat said giving a hint.
“Yes, your right and what shall be my name. You got a new name from Pinkie one week ago but me? And what is our next target?” Asked Rainbow.
“That are both good questions.” Said Flutterbat while thinking of an answer.

(Hint, Hint)


“Ach, neues Kapitel fertig. Jetzt kann ich mir meinen Apfel gönnen.” I said while trying to get to my apple.

*Hiss* „Ah, Flutterbat!“ I cried as a certain yellow Pegasus jumped out of my Pc trying to get to my apple. While drawing my pugio, she changed back to her normal form.

“Please don’t h-hurt me. I know I can a little bit batty-y but I won’t bite you!” She said while trying to hide behind her mane.

“Aw, how can anyone be mad at you for a long time?”

“So, you won’t hurt-t me with this thing?”

“Of course not. Anyways why do you are here? Wait don’t say it Twilight?” I asked.

Yeah. So, what are you doing?”

“I’m writhing on my fanfiction. I have an idea. You help me answer questions/ help me with my fanfics and I do my best to help you?” I asked.

“Y-yeah. But under one condition-n no clops, o-okay?” She asked.

“Yeah sure. See you next time, bye.”

“Bye”

Author's Note:

So yeah I am back, yay. As always I hope you like it (it isn't a full chapter but hey)! So questions, tips and issues are appreciated. Hope you like Fluttershy entering the scene. And I have a question for you: I will definitely write stories with german persones, how should I write: 1 just the german text. 2 the german text and the english in ()? See, ya.

Comments ( 3 )

Nur deutscher Text PLZ.

Hast zwar gut angefangen, aber es sieht danach alles schnell gemacht aus und so kurz. Würde mich auf etwas längere Kapitel mehr freuen.

Aber sonst schon gut soweit bisher. :raritywink:

Und ich würde eher englischen und deutschen Text schreiben.

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