A simple drawing contemplates its existence and the pony that created it, but wonders if there is more to life.
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Evictus II
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Yup. This is definitely something that Evictus 1 wouldn't have been able to pull off.
Confirmed; Evictus could not have written this. It's too good to be his.
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**first paragraph in** I concur. The use of imagery, and commas confirm, this is not Evictus 1.0
The one thing I would offer as advice is when you switch to Sweetie Belle, put a page divide so the reader and tell your switching perspectives. Oh and say ponies instead of people. These are ponies , not humans.
Other than that, I loved it. Good work.