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* a romantic
I demand sequel! Holy hell you set this up for the perfect romance.
This was nice, steamy, flowed pretty well and consistently 8/10. Would rate more, but I don't really care for bittersweet endings. Kinda kills the mood. Points for realism though.
You spelled Fleur De Lis' name wrong in both of your descriptions.
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Actually, LightningStyle is correct.
Fleur Dis Lee, from the MLP (canon) Wikia
8188685 Uhhhhh put your mouse over the Fleur character tag on the bottom of the story's page.
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{shrugs} I will stand by the MLP (canon) Wikia, and the official merchandise labeling(s).
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I know a majority of people use the naem, 'Fleur De Lis', but I decided to follow the canon and use that instead to avoid any issues. But to be fair on my end, if I wrote it the other way then someone would've commented the same exact thing. So blame Hasbro.
I just came to point out that your title is incomplete.
Mon petit chou fleur means my little cauliflower.
Your title, Mon petite chou is saying my little cabbage.
Mind you, I could be wrong - my French not being 100% - but I think it loosely translates to my sweetheart.
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It means, 'My Little Sweet Bun'. 'Chou' also means cabbage, but in this context it is short for chou à la crème. I currently live in Paris and can confirm that it is used correctly in the title.
Nice story!
Could I know who made the cover art?
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Cover photo was created by a person name 'Shydale', but his Tumblr is called 'Darkdale'
Hope that helps.
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Yes, it helped. Thank you!
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It was the correct call, always follow canon when and where you can.
With any good fan-work (-art, -comic, -fiction, etc.) the closer you can keep to canon, the more acceptable &/or believable the fan-work is to your audience, which is always a positive.
As for the Fleur-label itself, the "Fleur de Lis" label here on FimFiction long preceded Hasbro officially labeling her as "Fleur dis Lee", years after the character first appeared on the cartoon. FimFiction simply has not bothered to update the Character Tag's canon name-spelling. {Not putting any-thing/-one down for that, simply stating it is a very minor issue.}
Can't wait to read it let me grab a beer!
+I love the new update now there's a narrator
Very good