the tirek incident
Luna had just been finishing her 100th run in her new engine and had just been notified that there was a prisoner from Tartarus that had escaped, naturally Celestia being the idiot she was had sent Twilight Sparkle with all the power of the Alicorns to fight him, however she failed miserably, so it was Luna's turn next and she had a piece of weaponry just perfect for this, it is called the Paris railgun. 
so Luna travels back to Manhattan and picks it up, then runs over just 10 miles away from where Tirek was last seen.
"Coordinates 14.5, 150, 300 prepare to fire" L0una instructed the soldiers manning it.
The gun cranks it's way to the designated target.
"prepared to fire" the soldiers responded
"FIRE!" Luna commands
All of a sudden there is a loud BOOM as the gun fires, and the barrel retracts four whole feet from the recoil, but naturally due to superior intelligence, the round hits home and Tirek is killed in a single shot.
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First of all, this was so laughably short that I read it in less then a minute, and I'm a slow reader. I also give you an IGN/10 for the picture of a Schwerer Gustav and calling it the Paris gun. I get this is supposed to be a comedy story but it's over so quickly that any attempt at a laugh is forgotten.
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Well crud I looked up Paris gun and this came up so I blame Bing for this one, sorry.
and the ones that actually looked like something close to correct I couldn't put here so my bad.
also this was a comic chapter and someone finally comments YAY story mission achieved.
Hey, the story is short but it got chuckles out of me
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Finally someone who likes this story now to finish the next chapter.
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Well we have a very shared mine set in my opinion. You're basically writing what I like to write about, just with shorter chapters. It's good stuff man so definitely keep it up.
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Actually the chapters are about to get a lot longer. I hope. Because some big plot twists are in store.
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