Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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Great job my friend. I cant wait for more
was kind of hoping golden flash was plan on try to bring the princess and prince parent back to life in away to say sorry of what golden throne did
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Sorry, he's going a different direction entirely.
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i can see, i hope nothing happen to twilight foal,
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Don't worry, Golden Flash/Golden Thunder won't be able to harm Twilight & Artemis' foal. I won't spoil anything, but I will say that much.
Much better. Flow is much improved over the last chapter bomb you did.
I enjoyed reading this and although golden may do some damage I can’t see him being a lasting bad guy one they catch him doing something that’s actually illegal.
His ancestor should be a interesting problem. For everyone. Because he’s now sharing body with two souls and that must put a strain on a unicorn and since he’s already tired I expect the pressure to show in some way or he will need a break from court. but also because the old bad guy will be a cunning foe and make life hell for our alicorns.
I look forward to more.
Well it's 2018 as of now...this gonna be a very badass arc we're going into!
Okay I've bee following this story for quite a while and I want put in a complaint. Celestial has a pile of things she could not only detain but imprison Golden Flash for. Including: conspiracy to defraud the crown (attempts to change laws in his favor he involved other ponies) attempted fraud, assault of a princess (when he attempted to rip the book from Twi) conspiracy to commit treason and attempted treason, and 4 counts of planned assassination (in the library his wording was very threatening and with the recent attempts on their lives assuming he meant to cause seat pot great bodily harm to the "royal family") and she could even press trespassing try walking on to the white house or Buckingham palace when they are closed for the day. Celestial has enough evidence to detain him pending trial when the court opens up after the holiday.
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I'm sorry I want to make one thing clear I love the story and think you've been doing a fine job with it. Just my complaint at Celestia's comment.
Chrystal Empire is spelled wrong take out the h and it will be fine
I am know hoping something happens that brings Armor and Sundance back to life