Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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good chapter can;t wait for the next update
You have Generosity there twice. I think you meant Kindness?
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I can't believe I missed that. Thanks for catching it.
Don't worry. I fixed it.
ooooo i cant wait to see who wins this fight!!!!
Great chapter.
This is coming along great. The father son duel looking good and the lil incident there with twilight was a good gripping set of moments and I liked how she went into his mind.
I kinda wish there were a few more just trilight and Artemis moments but other than that, the story continues to be amazing
*goes in blind and starts with chapter 80*
...I think I read the description for the wrong story.
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The description would have made sense if you started at the beginning.
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Thanks. I fixed the mistake.
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I changed the paragraph to avoid confusion. However, the "everyone" that I was talking about was Pinkie, Rainbow, Rarity, Fluttershy and Applejack . . . in addition to Celestia, Artemis, Twilight and Spike. The girls were there because they had spent the night in Twilight's castle.
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I know. However, I have received complaints about the way that I handled the legal parts of my story. Many of them were saying that something that happened in my story would never work in the "Real World".
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Well that is dumb, Equestria is a completely different nation in a different world full of magic. The legal system would be radically different from anything on Earth.
I know I’m probably being impatient but when might you have the next chapter out, I want to read when the baby’s born
Is there plans to continue this story? Also to those who complained about the legal stuff in the story not working in the real world...ITS NOT YOUR STORY AND HE SAID AT THE BEGING OF THOSE CHAPTERS THATS HES DOING IT HIS WAY, you want it done the right way so it matches "real world" then make your own, this is a story about magic ponies doing magic bullshit and living happy lives
*pokes* update??
I'm not sure if need is supposed to be there, I've tried reading it differently and its still awkward