Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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I say less than that.
nice lovey chapter bomb i love it
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I was going for a cross between her being mischievous and teasing her brother. Besides, well, if you had a sibling that was over a thousand years old and finally found someone special, how subtle would you be?
This latest chapter bomb has been super awesome!
I had plenty of things to do tonight, but the nights plan went out the window when I saw the chapter updates.
It was totally worth sinking the time into reading this. Its so good. I think I will have to write Luna as a male in one of my upcoming fics now. You've totally sold me on the idea.
I would have gone with more than just 3 months between parents visits via dreams. 3 months seems like a very minimal wait to see her parents who had passed on into pony heaven.
Aside from that minor point, the building story is great and I think that it was cool for Twilight to get to meet Luna's parents. Even funnier that the pair know they are having a baby before the couple themselves do. Is this going to turn into a case of almost every pony knowing Twilight is pregnant before she does? Because the potential seems to be there.
Much trying to get the two to procreate was funny to read. All of it.
LOLOL Darn it Celestia, if you want some more exceptional foals running around the castle, theres always Discord to help you produce one or two as well (although this is coming from A DisLestia shipper, so yea, probably more me being cheeky and hopeful.)
I expected it of Cadence though. I'm surprised that Shining Armour and her weren't brought into the have babies talk more as they are a perfect pair to produce a few foals as well and give Equestria a few more royal youngsters.
Great updates. Thank you. Keep up the great work
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I'm sorry that it took me so long to respond, been a little busy.
1) Thank you, I'm glad you like it! Let me know when your male Luna story comes out. I want to read it.
2) I saw Twilight meeting Celestia and Luna's parents in a few other stories and really liked the idea. I wanted that to be a part of this story.
3) It is not that Artemis, or Twilight, can see or receive visits from everypony that has died. Only special ones that Artemis has placed in his Night Sky can make these visits. I only intend to have three ponies visit them from beyond.
4) You already know who two of them are, I'll let the third be a surprise. Don't worry, it will be revealed soon.
5) I'm torn between shipping Discord with Celestia or Fluttershy. I like both both pairings.
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for discord I say odd 3 some between the 3 of them, all togeather
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Interesting idea . . . Not the way I intend to take this, though.
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that alright I had feel it would not be but it still be funny
The last sentence the "he sent it the artemis" should be "he sent it to artemis"