Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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Does that mean he's called Prince Artemis?
good chapter bomb i like them all
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yeap
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Yes. I believe I covered that in Chapter 2, when I introduced him as Celestia's younger brother.
Yeah updates very good can't wait for more
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PLZ let twi have a filly
I hope Twilight has a filly first and then a colt :p
Things here continue to be intense. One threat and then another. Makes for an excellent read, especially with all the cute moments in between.
And if things cool down and they don't collapse every night, it should still be safe for another few months for them to still have sex before she gets too big. Probably a wedding needs to happen soon too (are none of the parents going to sugest to Luna that he marries Twilight before she gives birth to their foal?) Cause we could have a crazy turn up and try something there too.
This is shaping up to be one of the rare stories that I wish could be made into a movie. If this was a MLP movie, I would totally watch it in the cinemas. Probably multiple times too, it's just so special. I can really visuallise every moment of this story coming to life and it's really epic.
I think I've caught you using and/or in pony's speech. I think it's wrong, but then again I'm no gramma expert. It just seems ...very odd to me. Chapter 37 is the culprit, first:
He can send letters to Celestia and/or Artemis. The third way is even more direct and probably the preferred method. I know a mail spell, so I can communicate with Artemis, sending and receiving the orders myself.”
Second use: He can send letters to Celestia and/or Artemis.
Is this how people speak? I can't remember the last time I've seen "/" used within speech marks and it comes across as very unusual to me and pulled me out of the zone for a moment.
Aside from this minor issue I've thoroughly enjoyed every moment of reading the latest chapter updates.
I really can't wait for more. Now I wish there were more R63 Luna / Alicorn Twilight pictures as so far I don't think I've seen any... As a hardcore Tuna shipper, this story makes me wish Luna really was a male, or at least that he and Twilight had more fan art.
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I already have plans for how many foals they are going to have, which genders, names and descriptions. I have also come up with images as well, but won't spoil the surprise.
Images for the foals was easy. I have tried to find something with a male Luna and Twilight, but nothing I found so far seems right.
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cool its just when i picture twilight with a foal it's always a filly and a colt just doesn't feel right to me for twi idk
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Right now, the parents (on both sides) and Celestia are in the "Yes, they're having a foal!" mentality. When that wears off, they will be bugging them for a wedding. I'm just torn between two different ideas of exactly when that wedding will be. Before their foal is born, or a couple of months after. Either way, there WILL be a wedding, don't worry.
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make me happy I say go with plan before but right when the wedding start like they get to twilight walking down the aisle part her water break and she goes into labor maybe month or two early then they expect her to...
but then again anyway you do it it will be fun to read
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Well if its before then I hope its before Twilight starts to show too much. Much as Luna won't mind, I don't think she would want to walk down the isle if shes too 'fat'
You said foals
Does that men Twilight beats her brother for family size? I cant wait to find out
great updates. cant wait for more
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I would say do the wedding before their foal is born.
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I see your point about the "and/or" and have fixed it.
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Artemis explains his actions in the next chapter. Twilight just didn't want to talk to her parents at the moment. If she wanted privacy, she wouldn't have allowed Artemis into her room.
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Cadance is the "adopted" niece of Celestia and Artemis. At the time of the wedding, I plan to have them discuss this and decide to drop the "Aunt" and "Uncle". They will all just be brothers and sisters, connected through Twilight and Artemis' marriage.
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To help with the confusion the family will function as follows.
Celestia will have 2 younger sisters (Cadance and Twilight) and 2 younger brothers (Artemis and Shining Armor)
Artemis will have 1 older sister (Celestia), 1 younger sister (Cadance), and a younger brother (Shining Armor)
Artemis will be married to Twilight
Cadance will have 1 older sister (Celestia), 1 older brother (Artemis), and 1 younger sister (Twilight)
Cadance is married to Shining Armor
Shining Armor already has 1 younger sister (Twilight) and will gain an older sister (Celestia) and an older brother (Artemis)
Twilight has 2 older sisters (Celestia and Cadance) and 1 older brother (Shining Armor)
I hope that clears it up.
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oh it does I was more or less poke fun at it all, mainly cuase things get complex when u bring in the whole aunt/uncle level of stuff but how u have it is far more simple.
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just on a side note and doesn't really impact the story as a whole blueblood and blaze committed high treason, not the regular treason, also depending on how you look at it the court should have dismissed twilights and male luna's memories (cant spell his name to lazy to look for it)as evidence, and blazes confession as well, for 3 reasons
1) its a memory that could easily be made or falsified by twi and art via magic
2) the memories were left in the care of a family member with ties to the victim (her being princess don't mean shit really to the court of law) who could have again easily tampered with the evidence and has probable cause to do so.
3) ohhhhh boy blazes confession has a bigger holes in it than the 'TITANIC' YOU DO NOT LET A PERSON WITH TIES TIES TO THE CASE HANDLE AN INTERROGATION EVER!!! big giant NO NO right there.
3b) velvet threatened blaze by lighting her horn, all blaze had to do was say she coerced me into saying that with threats of violence.
and boom there goes your interrogation evidence
all in all, if this trial was held in a real court blueblood and blaze would have walked out of that courtroom smiling the biggest shit eating grin ever, and the topping on the cake is if he tried it again for the same reason, and failed he would just call double jeopardy and walk again.
so just thought i would let you know for future stories so you don't make similar mistakes, overall i love this story and can wait for new chapter
with that said, can i get a new chapter pretty plz
While I appreciate your comment, and will try to take it into account if I have trials in another story, I made sure to mention that I'm not a lawyer and have had no legal training. This is just how i wanted to write my story. I am well aware of the fact that this wouldn't work in the "Real World".
I'm glad you like my story.
I know it's been awhile since the last update. Unfortunately, I was having connection issues, so I couldn't post.
However, I could still write. As a result, I have several chapters that are almost ready. You can expect an update soon because, as soon as the new chapters are ready, I'll post them all at once.
Must tell you...I have reading this story for who knows how long since being on this site. known the character of artemis as r63 version of luna though the story called My dearest dusk by Cracked inkwell. Your story gave this interpretation of him more depth along with using cannon parts of the show(like twi being alicorn for example) i can't wait to see how this story ends!:) p.s: pm me when you have the chance i'd to chat with you.
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When is the next chapter coming out? I cant wait, I really love this story. It is one of my top favs
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I'm glad you like my story so much!
I'm visiting my family for the holiday and their Internet connection is more than a little inconsistent. It's not strong enough for a large upload, like a chapter post.
Just because the Internet connection isn't working well, doesn't mean I haven't been writing. I have 6 chapters ready and am currently writing a 7th. I'll post them in about a week, as soon as I get home.
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Sounds good my friend
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Fixing the ‘Aunt Celestia’ conundrum will definitely help from confusing people, do you have a plan for interactions with the royal foals? To avoid familial bonds turning romantic and resulting in a blue blood situation. I’m aware it takes generations for it to be an issue but most ‘nobles’ are not exactly play date worthy. Even Diamond Tiara, whom for all we know, isn’t a noble at all but would not be anywhere near Flurry Heart and future royal foals.