Twilight senses something troubling and teleports to Canterlot. This leads to a series of events that force her to face feelings that she had tried to hide.
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6/10 on the clop
The clop was.... Not the highlight here but I can see the purpose.
I would advice something stronger or more detail but still great chapter.
That was is one of my favorite sex scenes I've read in a while; short and simple, but at the same time it gives enough detail without becoming to excessive or draw out!
Well done!!
7/10 on the clop