‘What the buck?!!’ She thought . ‘Chrysalis is in love with…..Spike??!!’
..........................................what the f!?
So in the sequel, Spike is going to end up having Princess Ember, Gilda, Greta and the genderbent Thorax and Pharynx added to his family? As well as Chrysalis? That last one has me confused. How the f did Chrysalis fall for Spike?
“When he heard what had happened, he threw his shield out the window, smashing a nearby merch stand.” Cadence followed up. “I don’t think I’ve ever seen him so angry before.”
I just want to say a few things. 1) Was it absolutely necessary to use BB as the token douchebag? I mean, I understand that it's not beyond reason, but you could have also used some stand-in noble or other. Is it too much to ask for an agreeable BB sometimes? or even a supportive one? Heck, I wouldn't mind if he was a bit of an ass, but not to an extreme like this.
2) Nice touch on getting Zecora and Coco roped into the whole scheme. I almost expected some actual characters for the villainesses too.
3) Sequel?! FUCK YEAH! And now to get the next 6 girls into his harem as well. This ought to be interesting. I wonder what kinks and stuff will be found going forward from here, especially with the changelings and the dragons.
4) I was surprised at the lack of clop this chapter, but I guess we got enough in the previous chapters. Lol.
My favorite ship, mostly due to the fact he's the only one she didn't treat like crap when she was around.. also, it's just fun to pair spike up with female villains.
8910959 Which Spike X Villianess ship are you referring to? Your comment doesn' show which one. Is it Starlight? Mane-iac? Even Trixie??? Which one (or ones) are you referring to???
8914844 I love all the villainess x spike ships.. though Chrysalis x spike is by far my favorite. Though Nightmare Moon x Spike and Mane-iac x Spike do come in a close second and third.
“Wrong answer…” Spike growled. What happened next, was Spike turning Blueblood over. “Time to plant a dumbass tree!” Spike added as he slammed Blueblood’s face into the floor and only his legs and tail were seen.
9014884 Sorry for the late response, but I meant the tadpole part, where Spike's sperm was about to fertilize all the Girls' ovums. When they all returned to Castle, from comic book universe.
This final chapter was very fun to write. It's been a blast writing with you!! Cant wait to start the sequel!!!
If any of you have questions regarding this story, don't hesitate to ask me.
..........................................what the f!?
So in the sequel, Spike is going to end up having Princess Ember, Gilda, Greta and the genderbent Thorax and Pharynx added to his family? As well as Chrysalis? That last one has me confused. How the f did Chrysalis fall for Spike?
That ending
Why am I feeling that a sequel is coming? And I am looking forward to see how Cadance try to rope Chrysalis into Spike's harem.
So Spike is gonna have another 5 females join the already giant harem? Sounds good to me.
8909114
I DON'T KNOW N***A, BUT THAT'S ONE CRAZY F***ING TURN-OF-EVENT!!!!!
8909114
Yeah. We haven't figured that out yet. But hey, your reaction to it is PRICELESS
8909326
And I came up with it!!!
8909143
Yeah. There is one coming. And i am a part of it.
8909339
Aw you did... well shut up.
8909343
Ok. I'm just loving the reactions to it. ANd yours is perfect!!
I'm glad I could help with this chapter and sorry I couldn't do more to help but, life stiff happened.
8909384
I didn't know you helped him with this story man!!!!!
ALso, I'm the one who came up with the Chrysalis thing at the end
8909478
Cool nice job bro.
8909489
Thanks.
I'm looking forward to the sequel to this.
Great ending!
Was it a cabbage stand ?
I just want to say a few things.
1) Was it absolutely necessary to use BB as the token douchebag? I mean, I understand that it's not beyond reason, but you could have also used some stand-in noble or other. Is it too much to ask for an agreeable BB sometimes? or even a supportive one? Heck, I wouldn't mind if he was a bit of an ass, but not to an extreme like this.
2) Nice touch on getting Zecora and Coco roped into the whole scheme. I almost expected some actual characters for the villainesses too.
3) Sequel?! FUCK YEAH! And now to get the next 6 girls into his harem as well. This ought to be interesting. I wonder what kinks and stuff will be found going forward from here, especially with the changelings and the dragons.
4) I was surprised at the lack of clop this chapter, but I guess we got enough in the previous chapters. Lol.
love it! you are awesome
OMG OMG!!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEAL!!! And ths is a wonderful story!
Who is Mesosoma and Trachea?
8909949
Thorax and his brother Pharynx
My favorite ship, mostly due to the fact he's the only one she didn't treat like crap when she was around.. also, it's just fun to pair spike up with female villains.
8910959
I agree about the pairing up part.
8910959
Which Spike X Villianess ship are you referring to? Your comment doesn' show which one. Is it Starlight? Mane-iac? Even Trixie??? Which one (or ones) are you referring to???
I'm just curious...
8914844
I love all the villainess x spike ships.. though Chrysalis x spike is by far my favorite. Though Nightmare Moon x Spike and Mane-iac x Spike do come in a close second and third.
First thing I want to cover, tadpoles? HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! GENIUS. XD
Second, THERE'S GONNA BE A SEQUEL? o__O
8916231
Thx, I helped Sonicblitz18 on most of this fic.
He's the Silver-Tongue Swagon!!!!
I love this TeamFourStar reference. Also im kinda looking forward to a seque now.
8916683
Okay, this is long overdue, but you did a great job aiding in making this story. Especially when it came to the tadpole part. :D
9014403
Thx and the what part?
Heart can't take this much cuteness
me sense there is going to make a sequel for it
8909114
Didn't see that coming
Team4Star
Wait. Update list showed this got updated......but nothing changed. Am I missing something?
TFS
bet afew people said "wait what!!" at the ending here
Did something happen? My profile tells me that this got updated.
9014884
Sorry for the late response, but I meant the tadpole part, where Spike's sperm was about to fertilize all the Girls' ovums. When they all returned to Castle, from comic book universe.
10005352
oh ok.
So when is the sequel to this?
10078560
We're working on it.
Still looking forward to the sequal.
Who the hell is Skipe?!
11118974
That was supposed to say Spike. I have issues when it comes to typing sometimes.