“Good, in that case GO GET DRESS IMMEDIATELY!! AND I SWEAR CALM BREEZE, IF I FIND YOU NAKED IT ONE MORE TIME, I’M THROWING YOU RIGHT AT HUMDRUM’S DICK MYSELF!!!” Stripes says in anger making her assistant jump from the outburst and rushing to a locker where she finds a third change of clothes witch she wish will be the last one she will ever need.
I really want to have HumDrum get his kicks on the three villians...Mane-iac made that quip with Dr. Stripes and that that 'dildo up her butt cheeks' comment...and after realizing what they did (obviously they didn't expect nor plan for an over-powered horny dragon after all), it's about time for Spike/Humdrum to get his on them.
....not to mention it would be a good lesson to not overlook the sidekicks...Plus, I don't know why, but I have a weird feeling that one of the villianesses--my bit's on Mane-iac, personally--start to have a bit a crush on Humdrum, particularily that in a bit, the evil mares will experience a overly-horny (and frankly, REALLY pent-up adolescent) dragon first hand. Let's be honestly--they can't help but think of how much potential Humdrum really has to EITHER side, just needs the right catalyst.
And Sorry to the others, even though they have feelings for Spike, I think this is Twilight's ways to express how she really feels about Spike as more than a brother...So even though he's pined for Rarity for so long, I truly could see Spike staying with Twilight after all this is done as more as a couple...
this is a very sexy story. I like it a lot. the lesbian action was hot too. I was attracted when it's going to have tribadsim, fucking hot to me. The story is well written.
8600394 You did phenomenal on the lesbian parts. good on ya. I really can't wait to see more of your amazing work. Take it slow and be thorough with your work.
Also, if anything, I might have an idea that might be an interest to you guys. if you don't know, Dragons can have 2 dicks, so double the pleasure if anything, but hey, this is just an idea. It's your story, so no worries of you ignore it.
Either way, I love this, and I'll be tracking it. Keep working hard and stay frosty. Sorry had to say it. ^^
Spike was enjoying himself, but he soon wanted something more from Twilight. He pulled her up to his chest, making the mare yelp in surprise. She was about to ask what he was doing, but she flinched and let out a pained yelp when Spike suddenly bit down on her neck. She shuddered in response from feeling his teeth lightly puncturing her skin.
‘He’s… he’s… marking… me…’ Twilight thought Finely someone who remembers to make spike marking his mate.
Yeah. Trust me guys. That lesbian chapter took 2 nights to do.
Also, I noticed a few grammatical errors. NOthing big, but still, when fixed they could help the story flow smoother.
Who is Shadowmane?
That's just offering it to the Dragon Devil.
I really wonder what will happen the Mane 6 when they return to their world? Any lingering effects?
more please
8600858
Trust me, i helped write this. There will be more!
8600665
You will just have to wait and see!!
8600536
She an arch enemy of Mistress Mare-velous and an assassin for hire.
I really want to have HumDrum get his kicks on the three villians...Mane-iac made that quip with Dr. Stripes and that that 'dildo up her butt cheeks' comment...and after realizing what they did (obviously they didn't expect nor plan for an over-powered horny dragon after all), it's about time for Spike/Humdrum to get his on them.
....not to mention it would be a good lesson to not overlook the sidekicks...Plus, I don't know why, but I have a weird feeling that one of the villianesses--my bit's on Mane-iac, personally--start to have a bit a crush on Humdrum, particularily that in a bit, the evil mares will experience a overly-horny (and frankly, REALLY pent-up adolescent) dragon first hand. Let's be honestly--they can't help but think of how much potential Humdrum really has to EITHER side, just needs the right catalyst.
And Sorry to the others, even though they have feelings for Spike, I think this is Twilight's ways to express how she really feels about Spike as more than a brother...So even though he's pined for Rarity for so long, I truly could see Spike staying with Twilight after all this is done as more as a couple...
this is a very sexy story. I like it a lot. the lesbian action was hot too. I was attracted when it's going to have tribadsim, fucking hot to me. The story is well written.
8600394
You did phenomenal on the lesbian parts. good on ya. I really can't wait to see more of your amazing work. Take it slow and be thorough with your work.
Also, if anything, I might have an idea that might be an interest to you guys. if you don't know, Dragons can have 2 dicks, so double the pleasure if anything, but hey, this is just an idea. It's your story, so no worries of you ignore it.
Either way, I love this, and I'll be tracking it. Keep working hard and stay frosty. Sorry had to say it. ^^
8612934
Well, the story is his. I just did what he asked me to do.
And thanks.
That was my first attempt at a lesbian scene.
8612944
that was your first attempt? Wow. Jesus, you got skill man. I'm impressed.
8612976
Thanks man, but SonicBlitz came up with the idea. I just wrote it. Took several days to do, BTW
8612978
patcience and focus are the main keys to making a good scene in a clop story, and you mastered that well with the instructions.
8612985
Thanks.
Have you read my own stories BTW?
8612989
have not, but from your work, i am interested in seeing them in person.
8612991
Well, go ahead and read them. Apparently the SPike one is the best
8612993
I'll take note to that. ^^
8612998
YEah. Its a clop between SPike and a very rare ship.
Guess who it is.
Spike was enjoying himself, but he soon wanted something more from Twilight. He pulled her up to his chest, making the mare yelp in surprise. She was about to ask what he was doing, but she flinched and let out a pained yelp when Spike suddenly bit down on her neck. She shuddered in response from feeling his teeth lightly puncturing her skin.
‘He’s… he’s… marking… me…’ Twilight thought
Finely someone who remembers to make spike marking his mate.